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A new series you may enjoy

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Wray Wrigley A new novella series that is completely free to read online:

http://www.tayeltower.com/103/tayel-t...


message 2: by James (last edited Oct 04, 2017 08:43PM) (new)

James Court | 227 comments Hi Wray.
It is probably a result of writing on a web-page, but one comment I would make is to watch out for what is referred to as a wall of text. On the screen it appears as one large block of text. People are uncomfortable with this, especially at the start of a new book when you are trying to draw them in..

Whilst house styles vary you do need to watch out for visual presentation, and make clearly defined paragraphs. Indentation is the traditional method, and the opening paragraph should ideally be no more than eight lines long.


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