*Kriss's Writing*

[Kriss]

Please could I get some comment's and idea's for some of my writing? Lol, i need some help with character names, and it would be very helpful to get some critisim!
I'll start posting some of my book cover's and some of the book's I've come up with, poems, and anything else i can think of ^^

[Kriss]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

there's most of my writing so far ^^
I'm dying without critisim, not really, but I need to know whether or not any of my books are worth writing still ^^

[Kriss]

Book Covers!

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[[deleted user]]

I really like The Black Rose. You should keep writing.

[Kriss]

i can post more of the chapters I've writen for it if you want ^^

[Catie]

Good job on Shadows of Light! It is Fab!

[Kriss]

Thanks, I'll start working on the forth chapter

[[deleted user]]

Kriss wrote: "i can post more of the chapters I've writen for it if you want ^^"

Sure. That'd be great.

[Kriss]

by more chapters i mean one-and-a-half... thought i had more than that writen, but lately I've been editing the book... so now that chapter and a half is posted ^^

[[deleted user]]

Okay. Thanks.

[Kriss]

*chapter four The Bronze Angel is up for Shadows of Light*

[Catie]

YES!!

[Kriss]

XD

[Kriss]

*chapter five The Demon of Light is up for Shadows of Light*

[[deleted user]]

Keep writing The Black Rose. It's great.

[Kriss]

I'm till going to write it, only at this moment I'm having a bit of a writers-black for that story x_x

[[deleted user]]

Oh. That's too bad.

[Kriss]

I want to keep writing though because its one of my better book ideas, and I have planned out bits and pieces of the plot...

[Kriss]

*chapter six The Darkness of Memory is up for Shadows of Light*

[Kriss]

*chapter seven The Life Denied is up for Shadows of Light*

[Kriss]

please read my writing and give critism ^^

[Catie]

Okay. Sorry I will. I haven't been.

[Kriss]

its not a problem, I just want to know what needs to be fixed in it lol ^^

[Catie]

I will tomorrow. I have to go soon.

[Kriss]

alright, I know how that can be

[Kriss]

*starts writing the next chapter in Shadows of Light...*

[[deleted user]]

I'm just wondering, what is The Black Rose supposed to be about?

[Kriss]

its a long story, i took it un-posted it because i dont want anyone to steal the idea though

[[deleted user]]

Yeah, I saw that. Do you still have writer's block?

[Kriss]

mhmm

[Kriss]

I'm mainly working on Shadows of Light at the moment, but I'm going to pick up on The Black Rose eventually i like the story line i have going for it

[Kriss]

*chapter nine Chage; The Split Humanity is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*

[Kriss]

*chapter ten The Twin Demons is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*

[Kriss]

*chapter eleven The Ruby Tears is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review ^^ *

[Kriss]

chapter twelve is going to get interesting, this is where the major plot starts taking place ^^
PLEASE read and review the chapters I have posted, I really need some critism...

[Kriss]

*chapter twelve A Cruel Mistress is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review... *sigh**

[Kriss]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Please read lol, this is the first romance I've ever writen and its a short story, its kinda sad, and I wrote it when I was both bored and tired, so don't be surpised if its terrible... Please tell me what you think :P

[Kriss]

*chapter thirteen A Notion of Trust is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*

[Kriss]

*chapter fourteen A Declaration of Love is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*

(I'm thinking about re-writing the end of it though, so please tell me what you think, and tell me if it should be changed...)

[Kriss]

*chapter fifteen An Unheard Declaration is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*
(I've edited it, chapter fifteen now has a longer ending, and now chapter one is also edited a bit.)

[Kriss]

*Part Two for Shadows of Light is now posted, starting with chapter sixteen The Demon of Shadow*

[Kriss]

I'm adding something on to the ending of The Demon of Shadow, I didn't like that ending much so I'm going to post more to that chapter...

[Kriss]

Hehe... Heres the prolong to one of the books I want to write sometime soon :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

[Acacia]

I read it, liked it! Check out my review for a couple suggestions.

[Kriss]

Acacia wrote: "I read it, liked it! Check out my review for a couple suggestions."

I did ^^ And fixed the things you pointed out... I really want to start writing this one but I've told myself over and over again I have to finish a book, and so now I'm working on two diffrent ones at the same time lol

[Acacia]

Haha, I had the same problem with finishing books...now I'm only working on one (until NaNoWriMo) so I think I might actually finish...which would be awesome.

[Kriss]

Yeah... Goodreads helps alot for me, when people leave comments about my writing it inspires me to continue writing.

[Acacia]

Exactly! I never would have gotten past chapter two if it wasn't for this site. ^^

[Kriss]

Lol, I wouldn't have gotten past chapter one for Shadows of light if it wasn't for this site. And I love your book, btw ^^

[Acacia]

Thanks!

Now I feel guilty, because I haven't read yours...I shall go do that!!