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message 1: by Kriss (last edited Aug 05, 2009 03:19PM) (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Please could I get some comment's and idea's for some of my writing? Lol, i need some help with character names, and it would be very helpful to get some critisim!
I'll start posting some of my book cover's and some of the book's I've come up with, poems, and anything else i can think of ^^


message 2: by Kriss (last edited Aug 05, 2009 08:24PM) (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

there's most of my writing so far ^^
I'm dying without critisim, not really, but I need to know whether or not any of my books are worth writing still ^^


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I really like The Black Rose. You should keep writing.


message 5: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
i can post more of the chapters I've writen for it if you want ^^


message 6: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments Good job on Shadows of Light! It is Fab!


message 7: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Thanks, I'll start working on the forth chapter


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Kriss wrote: "i can post more of the chapters I've writen for it if you want ^^"

Sure. That'd be great.


message 9: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
by more chapters i mean one-and-a-half... thought i had more than that writen, but lately I've been editing the book... so now that chapter and a half is posted ^^


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay. Thanks.


message 11: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter four The Bronze Angel is up for Shadows of Light*


message 12: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments YES!!


message 13: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
XD


message 14: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter five The Demon of Light is up for Shadows of Light*


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Keep writing The Black Rose. It's great.


message 16: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
I'm till going to write it, only at this moment I'm having a bit of a writers-black for that story x_x


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh. That's too bad.


message 18: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
I want to keep writing though because its one of my better book ideas, and I have planned out bits and pieces of the plot...


message 19: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter six The Darkness of Memory is up for Shadows of Light*


message 20: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter seven The Life Denied is up for Shadows of Light*


message 21: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
please read my writing and give critism ^^


message 22: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments Okay. Sorry I will. I haven't been.


message 23: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
its not a problem, I just want to know what needs to be fixed in it lol ^^


message 24: by Catie (new)

Catie  | 243 comments I will tomorrow. I have to go soon.


message 25: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
alright, I know how that can be


message 26: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*starts writing the next chapter in Shadows of Light...*


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm just wondering, what is The Black Rose supposed to be about?


message 28: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
its a long story, i took it un-posted it because i dont want anyone to steal the idea though


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah, I saw that. Do you still have writer's block?


message 30: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
mhmm


message 31: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
I'm mainly working on Shadows of Light at the moment, but I'm going to pick up on The Black Rose eventually i like the story line i have going for it


message 32: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter nine Chage; The Split Humanity is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*


message 33: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter ten The Twin Demons is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*


message 34: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter eleven The Ruby Tears is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review ^^ *


message 35: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
chapter twelve is going to get interesting, this is where the major plot starts taking place ^^
PLEASE read and review the chapters I have posted, I really need some critism...


message 36: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter twelve A Cruel Mistress is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review... *sigh**


message 37: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
Please read lol, this is the first romance I've ever writen and its a short story, its kinda sad, and I wrote it when I was both bored and tired, so don't be surpised if its terrible... Please tell me what you think :P


message 38: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter thirteen A Notion of Trust is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*


message 39: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter fourteen A Declaration of Love is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*

(I'm thinking about re-writing the end of it though, so please tell me what you think, and tell me if it should be changed...)


message 40: by Kriss (last edited Aug 16, 2009 03:59PM) (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*chapter fifteen An Unheard Declaration is up for Shadows of Light, please read and review*
(I've edited it, chapter fifteen now has a longer ending, and now chapter one is also edited a bit.)


message 41: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
*Part Two for Shadows of Light is now posted, starting with chapter sixteen The Demon of Shadow*


message 42: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
I'm adding something on to the ending of The Demon of Shadow, I didn't like that ending much so I'm going to post more to that chapter...


message 43: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Hehe... Heres the prolong to one of the books I want to write sometime soon :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 44: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) I read it, liked it! Check out my review for a couple suggestions.


message 45: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Acacia wrote: "I read it, liked it! Check out my review for a couple suggestions."

I did ^^ And fixed the things you pointed out... I really want to start writing this one but I've told myself over and over again I have to finish a book, and so now I'm working on two diffrent ones at the same time lol


message 46: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Haha, I had the same problem with finishing books...now I'm only working on one (until NaNoWriMo) so I think I might actually finish...which would be awesome.


message 47: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Yeah... Goodreads helps alot for me, when people leave comments about my writing it inspires me to continue writing.


message 48: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Exactly! I never would have gotten past chapter two if it wasn't for this site. ^^




message 49: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Lol, I wouldn't have gotten past chapter one for Shadows of light if it wasn't for this site. And I love your book, btw ^^


message 50: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Thanks!

Now I feel guilty, because I haven't read yours...I shall go do that!!


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