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message 1: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) Post 'em here!


oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) yayz!


message 3: by Nada (new)

Nada | 27 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

please read (ch 1 & 4 are the best!)


message 4: by ♠Miriam♠ (new)

♠Miriam♠ (mirizzle) | 153 comments it was good!


message 5: by Nada (new)

Nada | 27 comments thanks!


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

roses are red, violets are blue, oh crap! i have gum on my shoe!


message 8: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
I have a crush,
but not on you!

XD


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

lol


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

good


message 11: by Casey (new)

Casey ~Stephy♥ wrote: "Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
I have a crush,
but not on you!

XD"


nice



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I hear the ring of the old church bell.
I’ll be waiting for you in either heaven or hell.
I shall seen you soon, my friend.
Here it comes, my very end.
Here I hold it, the knife.
It will soon claim my life.
I look down at my trembling hands,
I realize that I have not met all life’s demands.
The knife falls to the floor,
I shall pick it up, nevermore
The knife gleams in the light and I sigh.
Today is not the day that I will die.
In a trance, I leave the room
And its everlasting gloom
I slowly walk outside, into the nights air
I take a deep breath, the wind blowing in my hair
I lay down on the cold grass,
And look at the sky, as black as ash
My life is something I cannot give
We all have a right to live


message 13: by Casey (new)

Casey already read it


message 14: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) oh well


message 15: by Casey (new)

Casey haha


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

cool, i like yours casey


message 17: by Casey (new)

Casey ty. (:


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