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message 1: by Mayurakshi (new)

Mayurakshi Paul | 12 comments More than a thousand times I had said,
I won't succeed, 
I won't get it,
Not to myself,
But to others,
Because deep down I always believed in the magic,
The magic of me.


The things I said we're just an expression,
A thing that would hide my believe,
Because I was afraid,
If I fail,
People will talk behind my back,
And call me overconfident,


I was never that,
I was never overconfident,
But still I failed,
And now I don't trust myself,
My belief in myself,
Is long forgotten,
A thing of past.



message 2: by Carola (new)

Carola | 41 comments it's an interesting poem & you've certainly succeeded in your writing!
i hope it's not a description of yourself.


message 3: by Mayurakshi (new)

Mayurakshi Paul | 12 comments Carola wrote: "it's an interesting poem & you've certainly succeeded in your writing!
i hope it's not a description of yourself."


Thank you so much and no it's not really my life story but it has some similarity.
And if you want you can check out more of my poems here: https://lifeat17.wordpress.com/catego...


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