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message 1: by Jon(athan) (last edited Aug 24, 2017 11:12AM) (new)

Jon(athan) Nakapalau | 793 comments Sit with me on the beach...

and we will watch the full moon rise like a luminous pearl -

tomorrow the world will close around us...

a shell of conformity

trapping us in layers of responsibility -

but I will daydream about lying next to you in the warm sand.


message 2: by Dave (new)

Dave | 382 comments Nice one! You might like to see my poetry collection 'Sensual Rhapsody'


message 3: by Sue (last edited Jul 08, 2017 06:10AM) (new)

Sue Martin-Crowell | 13 comments Jon(athan) wrote: "Sit with me on the beach...

and we will watch the full moon rise like a luminous pearl -

tomorrow the world will close around us...

a shell of conformity

trapping us in layers of responsibil..."


Jon(athan) wrote: "Sit with me on the beach...

and we will watch the full moon rise like a luminous pearl -

tomorrow the world will close around us...

a shell of conformity

trapping us in layers of responsibil..."



message 4: by Sue (new)

Sue Martin-Crowell | 13 comments I love! Short, poignant, meaningful.


message 5: by Jon(athan) (new)

Jon(athan) Nakapalau | 793 comments Thank you Dave...will look up 'Sensual Rhapsody'...thank you Sue.


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