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message 1: by Simi (new)

Simi Sunny | 180 comments I did a reverse poem, not too long ago. I was hoping you guys woukd get to read it. This is based off of personal experience. I hope you guys can tekate to this poem.

I've dreamt to regain,
But I ignored.
From my past that tortured me,
A person that used to know.
Even if she has caused me pain,
I must let go and be brave.
The question is how?
I must decide the fate.
Get rid of of the poison of fear and overcome it
Or,
Let the poison take over me.
It's not too late,
To get the love that I did not receive
And,
The hugs that have not comforted me back then.
I will no longer be silenced by fear,
Along being trapped by misunderstanding.
But the nightmares have lingered on.

Now to switch it up

But the nightmares have lingered on,
Along being trapped by misunderstanding.
I will no longer be silenced by fear.
The hugs that have not comforted me back then
And,
To get the love that I did not receive.
It's not too late.
Let the poison take over me
Or,
Get rid of of the poison of fear and overcome it.
I must decide the fate.
The question is how?
I must let go and be brave,
Even if she has caused me pain.
A person that used to know,
From my past that tortured me,
But I ignored.
I've dreamt to regain


message 2: by Mohit (new)

Mohit | 10 comments Fabulous! Say how much time it took to craft this one?


message 3: by Simi (new)

Simi Sunny | 180 comments I think a day or two. But that's because I had an inspiration to write it out, after I had a semi dream/nightmare. It's tough, but it was worth it


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