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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > YA Sci-Fi Dystopian - 55k words

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message 1: by Chandlar (new)

Chandlar (chandlarskye) | 2 comments HELLO! I am 18 years old and this is my first (successfully) completed novel and I'm looking for beta readers who can help find grammar mistakes as well as provide helpful feedback on how to improve any aspect of my book. Comment if interested or perhaps email me if you prefer at .

Title: Remember
They had lied to everyone. They had kept secrets and hid things from the people they were supposed to protect. They thought they were doing the right thing, they thought they could fix the world but instead they destroyed it. They were given a chance to start over, they bargained lives in return for survival. The government leaders ruined everything and now was time for them to pay.
Colette didn't ask for this. She didn't ask for the nightmares or the lies or anything that came after that. She wanted a normal life -- a perfect life --
and she had that until things started going wrong. Until she noticed things she wasn't suppose to notice.
Then, she became aware.

message 2: by Penelope (new)

Penelope (peterpanly) | 1 comments Hello! I was wondering if you still needed a beta reader? I'm am excited from just reading your blurb on it. Sounds extremely intriguing.

message 3: by Chandlar (new)

Chandlar (chandlarskye) | 2 comments Yes I am! Thank you so much for replying

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