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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Dark High Fantasy Novel "The Four Territories" 111,888 Words

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message 1: by Stevie (new)

Stevie Collier (steviefiction) | 2 comments Hello everyone! I have a completed novel here that needs some awesome beta readers! (Book Cover Below) Here is a rough draft of my blurb:

Four exotic territories preside under four unique suns, each with their own distinct color, race, and culture. A young hybrid is born under the hottest sun in the cruelest of territories. In the realm of Reah, no place is safe for the young orphan, Esh, who is soon left for dead in the ash filled streets of the city of Zel.

An elderly male sees the transgressions of the people of Reah and saves the young boy, a kindness that is unheard of under the Red sun. However, there is something in this man's history that binds him to the young boy.

Esh soon learns that he must acquaint himself with the skills of assassination, martial arts, and alchemy in order to survive the unforgiving lands. These skills are his destiny for they will help to serve him in a quest he not yet knows of.

All is going well until a dark and forgotten energy finds its way into young Esh's body only to wreak havoc on his mind and drag his spirit in the direction of darkness.

If interested, please respond or send me a message! Thank you!

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message 2: by Susan (new)

Susan | 7 comments My kind of novel. If you are not in much of a hurry, I can give it a reading. It might take about two weeks, since I'm also writing myself. smlindeque@gmail.com


message 3: by Stevie (new)

Stevie Collier (steviefiction) | 2 comments Thank you so much! I went ahead and emailed you! I totally understand being busy writing lol.


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