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 Alex ~They/them~ ~Annabeth Chase and Alex Fierro are the best~ (percybluefood) | 469 comments Mod
MASI MASI MASI MASI MASI MASI MASI


message 4: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 01, 2017 08:43AM) (new)

Alex the ark angel of darkness wrote: "me to my son

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WTF

What is wrong with you?


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Masi wrote: "ITS MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!


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Alex the ark angel of darkness wrote: "Katiya wrote: "Alex the ark angel of darkness wrote: "me to my son

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WTF

What is wrong with you?"

hehehee"



Dude, like, seriously. My innocence is not safe


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*snort*

Well, not like I had any in the first place


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Catherine | 157 comments Do other things and get your mind off it, for now. Something will come to you.


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do you have a plot?


Phoenix~They/Them Prince Castor XD


Phoenix~They/Them Oooh maybe John Smith tries to kill Esperanza


Phoenix~They/Them Hypnosis!!!


Phoenix~They/Them Interesting.


Phoenix~They/Them Mwahahahahaha


Phoenix~They/Them Or maybe an evil sorceress killed them


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Trey (trelasd44) I can read the story for u if u want?


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Yeah, go ahead and do so."

No problem.


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Trey (trelasd44) How many stories or short stories have you written? It seems you have experience!


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Trelas wrote: "How many stories or short stories have you written? It seems you have experience!"

Not that many, really, not that many. And I'm mad young."


I'm 13, I've written alot and trust me, I threw a LOT away. I feel I have experience and at the same time, not a lot, at all.


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Trey (trelasd44) But I have two stories right now that I feel I can build upon.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "I have won poem contests and story contests before."

Wow, I have never won one or even entered lol, thats cool.


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Trey (trelasd44) Because of you, I just decided to submit two chapters of my story on Goodreads, thank you Masi!


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "I need ideas of a story. People barely comment in my journal so it's just me talking to myself. How fun when I'm asking you the people to help me and give me feedback."

What story are you going for?


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Your welcome! Send me a link or I will try to go on your profile..."

Here:

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


message 25: by Trey (last edited Mar 03, 2017 05:28PM) (new)

Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Trelas wrote: "Masi wrote: "I need ideas of a story. People barely comment in my journal so it's just me talking to myself. How fun when I'm asking you the people to help me and give me feedback."
..."


What story you are trying to think of. Thats what I was saying.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Trelas wrote: "Masi wrote: "I need ideas of a story. People barely comment in my journal so it's just me talking to myself. How fun when I'm asking you the people to help me and give me feedback."
..."


A romantic story, a story about a girl through life, a high school story, a supernatural story? What have you not tried writing yet?


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blue (hermiionegranger) Hey Masi. I'm here ;D


Dasha ~Made of bad materials, yet well put together~ (iliketoreadangryreviews) | 487 comments Story ideas? Maybe add some magical miso aspect! Like... I don't know... spells and stuff? Gods and demons?


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "I haven't tried writing it yet because I'm getting my ideas straight. It's hard to explain it, but I have the plot written down in my mind. It's about an orphan Diana who's picked to go to a Planet..."

So where do you want to go with this character Diana? Is she going to grow up (as years pass, she practices) and eventually set out to defeat Mistress May?


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Trey (trelasd44) Wait, whats gonna be the plot twist?


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "I have a role play group based on this, which explains even more."

Ah, is it on here, I wouldn't mind following the progress of this book, I'm interested.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Trelas wrote: "Masi wrote: "I have a role play group based on this, which explains even more."

Ah, is it on here, I wouldn't mind following the progress of this book, I'm interested."

Yeah, I hav..."


Same, I'll talk to you later.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Maybe I could be a cbild author like Micheal. I have only read the first chapter because I have alot of writing to do."

No problem, and you could quite possibly be a child author, I want to be one too.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "I couod be a science fiction, historical fiction author. I would love that."

I think you would be a perfect science fiction writer based off of the things you have written so far.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Trelas wrote: "Masi wrote: "I couod be a science fiction, historical fiction author. I would love that."

I think you would be a perfect science fiction writer based off of the things you have writ..."


Exactly, its perfect.


message 36: by Trey (last edited Mar 04, 2017 09:09AM) (new)

Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Yeah. But writing is serious, and I know how to use a computer and print out my work all of that. Been there done that. I just need to start writing."

Right now, I'm writing on Google Docs and although I don't have a plan, I feel confident I can just go with the flow of words.


message 37: by Trey (new)

Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Trelas wrote: "Masi wrote: "Trelas wrote: "Masi wrote: "I couod be a science fiction, historical fiction author. I would love that."

I think you would be a perfect science fiction writer based off..."


Around 150 million of cars, mansion, estates and mostly profits of businesses.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "So let me put my ideas together.:

It's about an orphan Diana who's picked to go to a Planet called Zuuroco because her mother was picked too. She finds about the different nations, Alagaf, Mandali..."


Hmmm, what could you do with this?


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Mhmmm. I write on word 2013"

My family has 3 computers, one in which I usually work on has Word, but my sister is on it so I'm using one of the older computers which has a weird writing app on it, its why I'm using Google Docs now.


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Trey (trelasd44) What should be the age of Michael?


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "hmmm. I writr at my school when we have recess or study hall. A!so, at home I write too. I just read an article about young authirs,and they said you just keep writing and go with the flow. After t..."

I write at home mostly but yeah, I just like to go with the flow.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "Easier that way. But I don't know wgat to name my story. Zuuroco?

Diana and the (don't know yet)"


The Legacy of Diana. Maybe.


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Trey (trelasd44) Masi wrote: "That sounds cool! But everybody has names like that when your talking about sci-fi...

The Legacy of Zuuroco"


Now that is really good!


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Trey (trelasd44) I know D means Diana but what does W mean? My mistake if you have already said this.


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Trey (trelasd44) That title is perfect.


message 46: by Trey (new)

Trey (trelasd44) Got it.


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Trey (trelasd44) Do you have any idea what the titles will be for future books?


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Trey (trelasd44) For that long title, I don't think the Martian Fight would be good because people instantly think of aliens when saying Martian instead of Fairies, Vampires and the witches, wizards or humans. Hmm..


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Trey (trelasd44) The Fight For Dominance. Nah...does that work?


Phoenix~They/Them The fight for a new home


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