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It's read with a British accent so that may be the reason why. That, or I've been pronouncing it wrong all these years.
How do you pronounce LIBRARY?

The writing is also very inconsistent. There are things that are well described, detailed, and others that are completely left to the imagination and I couldn't see the rationale behind it. There are scenes where the author really helped me imagine the decor, the movements and everything, and others where I was just reading words and couldn't actually follow how everything was working out or looked. I prefer a more consistent way of telling a story: either you only talk about actions and leave everything else to the reader, or you provide some staging info every step of the way. The dialogues are not very natural either, and I read a similar comment somewhere so I'm not the only one who thought the author could have worked on those a bit more.
Now the issue with the story: there is no twist, it's a series of events and adventures, but there is absolutely no twist. I kept anticipating surprises and I found the plot to be very.... linear....
Again, I did enjoy the book and I will pick up the second in the series. It is her first novel, so I believe she will/did get better with practice!


I couldn't agree more, it's a good read, but it's not great and some of thew ways in which it falls down could have been avoided I think.

I think this book will benefit from the other ones. I believe the author should have taken more time in the first one to explain all the context and the complex world the stories evolve in, and let go of a couple alligators... I will definitely add the other ones to my to-read list. Do you know if she only meant it to be a trilogy?

The only complaint I had is that I couldn't figure out the dynamic between the characters. Call me a total romance addict, but is Irene into Vale? Into Kai? Into both??? Or neither?
I mean a girl has to keep herself entertained.... I hope that is flushed out more in the next books.

I think this book will benefit from the..."
I want to believe that there will be more books in the future. The third book ended in a way that I just can't believe that the author wouldn't follow up and answer more questions.

I totally agree that the dynamic between Irene, Kai, and Vale is confusing. And in the next two books it doesn't truly get flushed out, I think the romance part is just a small part of the story. I am hoping there will be more books.

I just finished it (finally! I'm so behind!) last night, and I agree completely with this. It was a light, kinda fluffy, enjoyable read, but I wanted something meatier out of it. The world was fascinating, but I ended up with too many unanswered questions, and some of the characters felt really flat and inconsistent.
But I'm still going to be giving the rest of the series a shot! I really like the world, I just want to see maybe a teensy bit more polishing and editing in the rest of the series.

I think this book will b..."
The fourth one should come out at the end of this year!

It's funny how you can be quite disappointed with so many things in a book, but in the end... we all want to read the rest of the series! I guess the author knew where to put the efforts to catch her readers nonetheless!

Seriously! I didn't love the book, but I am surprisingly eager to see how the series goes. I just have such a weakness for books about books. xD

This confused me too, and I'm fine with little to no romance, but I felt in the last half her connection with Kai was forced in the little-casual-touches and seriously-I-just-fell-on-you-three-times way. And I was like no. I don't feel like the attraction was earned.
And the initial description of Kai as too attractive to get with was obnoxious. For one, I don't see Irene as someone who has that reaction to visually attractive men, like "Oh, I'll never get with him, he's too pretty." And then it was a dead give-away that he would end up being the main love interest.
But the confusing part is her thing for Vale, which is more fitting, and how she shut Kai down initially.
So I loved this book but if she and Kai have a forced romance in the future it might put me off.

In the question of methods, though, I do appreciate that Irene's diplomatic approach won over Bradamant's every-woman-for-herself. Usually when that comes into question, everyone assumes that being aggressive and self-serving is more efficient. It's like some harsh reality that I still haven't accepted, and people always think I'm naive--ok I'm taking things personally lol. So it was nice to diplomacy and honesty held up over covertness and individualism. What do ya'll think?
Sword & Laser is reading this as their main pick for April 2017, so now Veronica has to read it. You can follow the discussions in this folder: https://www.goodreads.com/topic/group...

Definitely action packed and always moving, i enjoyed it. One draw back i had was the world building of the alternate. Didnt fully grasp the "chaos" aspect.