YA/NA Contemporary Short Story

[Ashley]

This is a completed 10,198 word and 16 page short story.

I am looking for general feedback as to the flow, pace, if it needs more or less. Anything you would like to share feedback wise I am looking for.

There are no sex scenes in this book.

[T.L.]

Hey Ashley,

Would you want to swap? Although mine's a little longer (5 chapters).

[Ashley]

Hi T.L.

I would be happy to trade. I am kind of backed up on blog tour reviews but I could maybe fit something short in.

[T.L.]

Okay :) I tried to message you my email address but it looks like you're not accepting incoming messages on here. Can you message me instead and I'll give you my email from there?

[C.E.]

I'd be happy to give your short a read through if you still need/want additional beta reader. I write YA Fantasy and am an avid reader in the genre as well :)

[Ashley]

Chelscey,

I would love as much feedback as possible. Just send me a message with your email and I will send a copy over.

[Angel - Angel Reads]

Hey Ashley,

If you are still looking for some people, I would love to do it. If you want.