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message 1: by Chad (new)

Chad Kriss | 5 comments Hi Everyone!

I'm looking to get some feedback on my thriller novel of about 70k words.

Ten-year-old Charlie Carson’s reality is so bad the only way he can deal with his reality is through his imagination. While Richard Hanford hands Charlie's drug-addicted mother more narcotics, Charlie envisions Richard as super villain Doctor Psycho injecting an energy drainer serum in Charlie's trapped mother.

Just as Charlie overhears Doctor Psycho’s plan to destroy his newly made foes, his recently moved in, next-door neighbor and classmate, Denise Proctor, develops a crush on the ten-year-old boy. Even though the feeling is mutual, Charlie isn't sure if he should even acknowledge her presence, afraid Doctor Psycho might hurt her. With the help of a school bus driver, a college drug dealer, and a purple plush toy, Charlie must discover what makes a true hero to defeat Doctor Psycho.

If there's anyone who'd like to help me out, let me know how and where you want it sent and I'd definitely appreciate the feedback!

Thank you!


message 2: by Caroline (new)

Caroline Feeney | 5 comments I can read this for you Chad.
Crfeene@eircom.net

Caroline


message 3: by Chad (new)

Chad Kriss | 5 comments Thank you Caroline!

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