SciFi / Horror Short Story

[Scorpio-of-Autumn]

I'm getting ready to send out this story to more publishers, but I want to double check that it's the best it can be. It's about 5k words, and meant for a scifi / horror readership.

Looking for at least three people to beta for free. I'll be more than happy to do a Beta swap of short stories and the first chapters of novels in exchange. I offer honest and attentive feedback, as I hope to receive it as well. :)

[Scorpio-of-Autumn]

I plan on keeping the plot a surprise, as I would like a reader's reaction to be the same as a potential publishers. Looking for betas to go into this blind and give their honest feedback.

[Scorpio-of-Autumn]

Still open to offers for a Beta swap. :)