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[~Perry~ Soul Taker!!!!, Dr. DreamGirl]

Post your characters here for approval once they've been finished, out of spoilers. Once it has been approved by a MOD, please remove it from this topic and place it in the finished characters thread.

[~Perry~ Soul Taker!!!!, Dr. DreamGirl]

Approved

[~Perry~ Soul Taker!!!!, Dr. DreamGirl]

( It's okay )

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Approved

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Weird And Odd wrote: "Name: Acelin
Rouge Pack Name: Darkmoon
Rouge Rank: None
Age: 15
Sexuality: Panromantic Asexual

History: Acelin was born into the Darkmoon pack with both of her parents being warriors. She didn't p..."

what you have is good so far but I think you could add more information on the History

[Weird And Odd]

Okay, thank you

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

It's okay :)

[Weird And Odd]

Did it (I can add more if needed I'm just bouncing between things)

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Your character needs to have a rank, I can see that she has left but maybe you could say she was once this rank and know she is known as an outcast or something and joined a new Rogue pack. That could also help make your history at least two paragraphs.

[[deleted user]]

I love your LGBT+ inclusion :)

[Weird And Odd]

Okay got it

And that's literally me so I cant act straight if I wanted to XD

[[deleted user]]

Hahaha, same. My friend and I are both Pansexual, and literally EVERYONE thinks we are lesbian for each other (sadly, we can't come out, as we will be disowned by our Mormon parents)

[Weird And Odd]

Yikes that sucks, I'm sorry :(

[[deleted user]]

It'll be ok. Just 4 more years until we can move away!!!

[Weird And Odd]

BE FREEEEEE

[[deleted user]]

Hahaha!!

[Weird And Odd]

Also I added more

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

It looks good :)

[[deleted user]]

Ok. Let me look.

[Weird And Odd]

Also row, if you wanna vent about how secretly gay you are and how clueless your parents are or any problems you have, you can totally message me

[[deleted user]]

Haha ok, I may have to take you up on that sometime!

Umm... The only suggestion I have is to put the last paragraph of her personality in Acelin's history, as I think you have to have at least 3 paragraphs of history. But once thats done, I approve it!! :)

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

I also approve it :)

[Weird And Odd]

Thank you! Now do either of you wanna rp?

[[deleted user]]

I'd love to, but I don't have my rogue done. I'll work on it though, asap!!!

[Weird And Odd]

Okay!

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Do any of you want to give me advice on my rogue?
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Name: Letitia Zewski
Nickname: Lea
Rouge Pack name: Nightstone
Rouge Rank: Beta
Age: 21 yrs old
Date of Birth: 3rd of September
Gender: Feamale
Sexuality: Straight
Distinguishable Markings(if any): Bright Blue Icy eyes Dark black fur (wolf Form)

Personality: Letita has a fiery personality and can be quiet sarcastic at times. She can be boastful and is good at what she does which is killing vamps. She enjoys the winter wind against her fur and loves helping the one youngs learn to fight. She will do anything to protect her pack. Letitia has a strong skill for listening and uses that as an advantage against her enemies. She shares her secrets with her best friend.

Strengths: She enjoys hunting in the wind as it smothers the anger in her bones and helps her think clearly. Ever since her fathers brutal killing she has had to find ways to calm herslelf down occasionly and she finds the wind tends to keep her calm.

Weaknesses: Failing her pack mates. She let her father down by not training properly when she was young and he paid the price. Ever since then she hates to fail and doesn't like seeing her packmates hurt even a little bit.

Goals: To exterminate the Vampires

History:
Letitia grew up with family surrounding her. From the moment she could walk her father had trained her how to stalk and slaughter prey. It was challenging for her as she hated the taste of death upon her mouth and gaged at the sight of a freshly slain creature. Deep down she felt guilty for tearing out a rabbit’s throat and stealing a fawn from its distressed mother. After each hunt she would punish herself by refusing to eat, her mother knowing her distaste for eating the innocent pulled her aside and gave her berries and dried bits of meat. In the end her means to harm herself never seemed to work as her mother would always win their silent battles just by raising an elegant eyebrow.
When winter came her mother and father journeyed with her to teach her how to hunt in the cold.

She grew icier by the minute and didn’t seem to notice the unnerving stillness of the forest. She told her parents they should split up and her mother shook her head and barked once in protest. Upset at the refusal she stalked over to a bush and sulked as the cold wind nipped at her fur. A few minutes passed and Letitia grew more aware of her surroundings. She sniffed the air twice and whined as a thorn dug into her paw. Her father came up behind her startling Letitia and yanked the thorn free. That’s when a clawed hand gripped her father’s neck and blood burst from his throat. She screamed and the hand released its brutal grip only to gouge her father’s eyes from his sockets. She tried to help but something snaked across her body holding her firmly.

Her cheeks where tear stained and her father whispered… well gurgled “I love you Lea…” all the while choking on his own blood. She started sobbing as her heart felt numb with so much pain and despair. Her attacker traced her throat with a bone chilling finger and howled in outrage as something tore him away from her. Letitia stared in shock as she watched her mother take down each monster with her teeth and paws. She marvelled in the sheer beauty of their death and joined her mother, all the while welcoming the taste of death upon her lips. She wreaked havoc to the woods and avenged her father’s death. When they arrived home her mother told her the monsters that butchered her dad where Vampires and she hated the way the words rolled of her tongue sending pure rage shattering through her.

Each day Letitia trained side by side with her two brothers and no longer feared killing. She was no longer scared of being an unstoppable machine of death. She relished the taste of Vampire blood and longed to exterminate more of them. Letitia knew no ten-year-old girl should have to see their father murdered in cold blood and vowed to protect her pack from the vampires. It has been exactly eleven years since her father’s death and Letitia is now a woman, no longer afraid. She is a butterfly hatched from its cocoon, ready to embrace the world and put the monsters in their place.


Apperance:Wolf and Human


Family: She has two older brothers who are very protective of her as she is the youngest child in her family. She witnessed her fathers death by Vampires and was sure she would perish too but her mother saved her life. Her mother keeps a look out of Letitia and her brothers and once in a while cries over lost husband.
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[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Weird And Odd wrote: "Okay!"

If you haven't already remember to claim your rank

[Weird And Odd]

Looks perfect!

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Thanks :) I wasn't to sure if I needed to add anythig else

[Weird And Odd]

Manon wrote: "Weird And Odd wrote: "Okay!"

If you haven't already remember to claim your rank"

Whoops got it

[[deleted user]]

I think its really good!!!

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

RowAelin3 (Aubrey) wrote: "I think its really good!!!"

I'm going to add that your rogue Korrick is her boyfriend

[[deleted user]]

Awesome,
Also, @Weird and Odd, if you haven't already, you can take your rogue off of this thread and put her in the finished characters!!!

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Yay I finished my Rogue and Werewolf all I have to complete is Peris' Hottie.... and I'm stuck *sighs*

[[deleted user]]

Oh no!!! Do you want me to help you in the Mods Chat?

[Weird And Odd]

Okay awesome! I can help you if you want me to Manon

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Okay cool Heres the link Click Here

[[deleted user]]

(is sebatian peris hottie?)

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Yeah :) my characeter and her wolfie are having a forbidden relationship

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

RowAelin3 (Aubrey) wrote: "Oh no!!! Do you want me to help you in the Mods Chat?"

Yeah if you want that would be awesome :)

[[deleted user]]

Ok :)

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

I would like to know if my character is good, if you have any advice please let me know :)
(view spoiler)[Pack: Moonlight
Rank: Sentinel
Name: Clarissa Vantino
Nickname(if any): Lysandra Zenik (Everyone calls her Lysandra no one dares call her by her Vampire name)
Age: 19 yrs old
Date of Brith: 3rd of July
Gender: Female
Sexuality:

Appearance: Wolf and human form




Distinguishable Markings(if any): Goldy brown fur in her wolf form. Human form she has bright red hair

Personality: Lysandra has a cunning and fiesty personality. She loves to torment and tourture her enemies as she finds it a fun way to relieve her of her stress. Although when it comes to friendship she is the nicest and most loyalist person you can ever come across. Despite her nasty demeaner she really is a loving person who cares about one thing.... to destroy those who hurt her and also wipe out Vampires

Weaknesses: none
Goals: To wreak havoc upon her half Vampire family

History: (At least three paragraphs.)

Lysandra doesn’t remember her family as they abandoned her in the woods when she was young. A Gamma from the moonlight pack found her wandering around aimlessly and raised Lysandra as her own. Her adoptive mothers name was Cecily Zenik and she named Lysandra after her best friend who was brutally murdered by Rogues. Together Lysandra and her mother hunted together and helped the young ones with training. A few years later Lysandra’s real mother named Tamika came to claim her and accused Cecily of stealing her baby.

Tamika was Rogue and Lysandra hated being overlooked by her pack mates as an outsider. She walked up to Tamika and declared Cecily was her mother and to prove herself she teared Tamika’s throat out. She felt no regrets and she certainly didn’t feel any remorse. Cecily came up to her and cupped Lysandra’s face and kissed her cheek. She announced that Lysandra was definitely Moonlight material and Lysandra was given the position of Sentinel. Her mother whispered that she would always love her no matter what she chooses in life and embraced her daughter tightly.

On Lysandra’s seventeenth birthday her mother took her out to hunt down her first Vampire. She transformed in to her wolf self and blended in to the shadows mimicking their movement. Her eye caught the tiniest flicker of movement and she spotted a Vampire sitting in a tree. Her breathe caught in her throat and she whimpered in shock. Something snapped deep within her and she howled in pain. The Vampire stalked up to her and lovingly whispered “Sister” and disappeared in to the night.

She was left there stunned and overwhelmed as thousands of thoughts flooded into perspective. It explained so much about her that no Elder could understand… well no pure blooded werewolf anyway. She was Rogue… she always knew this but she was more she was half Rogue and half Vampire. She had a brother… and somewhere out there she had another family who had watched over her. She now understood why she was left near the forest, abandoned and alone. It was because her Vampire family was terrified for her.

They didn’t want the other vermin to find out she wasn’t a pure blood, to find out that she wasn’t unholy. She longed to see her brothers face and wished to hear the strangeness of his ancient voice. She waited near the exact spot she met him for three days and she saw him again. She was in her human form looking directly at a Vampire…Her sworn enemy. She fidgeted in her spot and they both started awkwardly at each other, until he finally broke the silence and whispered a name… “Clarissa…” he smiled and muttered “No she named you Lysandra” Lysandra stared unblinking and unmoving and spoke for the first time and asked “Clarissa? Is that my real name?” He nodded once and replied “I’m Sebastian Vantino…. your brother” She gasped for no reason at all and then he slammed his claws in to her. She shrieked in pain and tears swelled from her eyes. She didn’t understand why he was attacking her and then before she knew what she was doing she lunged her teeth into his arm, clamping down hard. He threw her off like a fleck of dust and disappeared in to the night.

Lysandra told her mother of her strange encounter and she coddled her lovingly. From that moment Lysandra swore to herself that she would never be fooled by Vampires again, family or not. She knew deep down that they were cruel sadistic beasts with no feelings what so ever.


Mother: Cecily Zenik (Adopted her)
Father: Unknown
Brother(s): Sebastian Vantino (Vampire she hates)
Sister(s): None
Other Relatives: Unkown

Other: Although of her Vampire/Rogue Heritage no werewolf cares that she is in the pack as she swore in front of the entire moonlight pak that she will eliminate each and everyone that dares cross with her pack... with her family
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[[deleted user]]

Wow!!! Ummmm.... The only thing I can think of that you need to do is to give her a sexuality.

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Oh yeah I forgot about that thanks :)

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

YAY!! I have completed my Vampies history :) all I have to do is personality and that should be it

[Iroh]

wait does it really have to be 3 paragraphs?

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

At least three paragraphs or I'll be nice and make it at least two paragraphs.... depends how lengthy it though

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

I actually find it fun doing the history that's why most of mine are pretty long... :)

[Iroh]

it's a pain in the a** sometimes for me.

[Manon , Hades (The underworld awaits for those who are naughty)]

Yeah It took me a while to do my Vampires history I have already created four charcaters.... two werewolves, one rogue and one Vampie