1 Chapter, YA

[Jeniffer]

I am writing a book about a 18 year old boy who wakes up in a hospital in Brooklyn without recollection of who he is, after finding out he was no one who loves him and there is pretty much nothing that ties him to this world, he decides to commit suicide, but after he ties the noose around his head, and lets the chair fall, he notices that he's still breathing fine and he's not dying. 20 minutes of hanging and someone appears into the room, and it has two announcements: The boy is the Grim Reaper in charge of America, and everyone has stopped dying. I want some feedback on my writing, I am awaiting for a beta reader.

[Manasa]

Hello! I'd love to beta read this. My email is manasa.manu84@gmail.com. Shoot me a mail :)