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message 1: by Ripley (last edited Oct 26, 2016 05:28PM) (new)

Ripley Jordan (RipleyJordan) | 9 comments Warning!!! Adult langue, sex, and violence.

Hello everyone. GRAVISTAS Is the name of my first novel and I am about 1/3 of the way done (30k words). Looking for some feedback.

Dawn Parsons is a small town girl who has moved around a lot since becoming an adult. She likes being alone, dressing like a man, and avoids all physical contact whenever possible. Has two people she would call a friend, but is completely indifferent to everyone else.

Five years ago she settled down in Burbank, California among the rich and famous of Hollywood. Her clients are wealthy and powerful, but the only thing Dawn ever wanted was to be left alone. That is, until life confronts her with a choice. Turn around and do nothing, or take matters into her own hands.


message 2: by Ripley (new)

Ripley Jordan (RipleyJordan) | 9 comments Hey guys, still looking for someone to take a look at my work...


message 3: by Mel (new)

Mel Daggart | 2 comments Hey, Ripley.

Are you still looking for someone to read your work? I have time available and I’d like to read it.


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