100k complete Fantasy/Adventure novel

[Philip]

Hello. First timer here. My 7yr project is finally at the point where I can let it go. Book 1 anyway. I would love thoughts on the story as a whole. I have gotten tons of smaller sentence and paragraph input but not much feed back on the whole thing.

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[Scorpio-of-Autumn]

I may be able to help. :) PM me and we can work out a schedule.