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message 1: by kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~, Music is my life. The lyrics are my story (new)

kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~ (percybluefood) | 528 comments Mod
So because I forgot to put it up yesterday, I'm just gonna extend it to monday just this week. The theme is birthdays good luck.


message 2: by Funky Fish (new)

Funky Fish (goodreadscompetitcroissant) ((Just checking, we post our songs in this thread, correct?))


message 3: by Funky Fish (new)

Funky Fish (goodreadscompetitcroissant) ((I'm going to take that as a yes)) :)

Birthday

Crank up the music,
Turn on the lights!
We're gonna party
All damn night!

Turn up the speakers,
Hit the bass drops
Party so hard
'Till we can't even stop!

Tonight, I'm gonna lose myself
Tonight, I don't need your help!

And we're gonna dance, dance, dance
Cause it's my birthday,
We'll party my way
We're gonna leave it all behind
Let go of everything,
Just get up there and sing

Hap-hap-happy birthday (Happy Birthday!)
Hap-hap-happy birthday (Happy Birthday!)
Hap-hap-happy birthday (Happy Birthday!)
Come on and dance, dance, dance

Cause it's my birthday!
We'll party my way

Tonight.

((I know it's not the best song in the world, but I did my best!))


message 4: by Valaraxin (last edited Aug 04, 2016 12:43PM) (new)

Valaraxin Cometh (UNNAMEDSOURCE) | 1 comments Hello?
I’m here to say,
To sing away,
Cause it’s my,
BIRTHDAY!

Presents stacked in neat piles,
Waiting for my hand to,
Peel away,
That ugly, wrap paper,
I’m here at last,
Finally,
I’m 14,

I’m gonna scream,
Yell away,
I have a right!
It’s my,
BIRTHDAY!

Ready?
YES!
Time to sing,
Time to bring,
Out that cake,
(Birthday!)

Prepare the punch,
I’m gonna munch,
On the cake,
Let's celebrate,
Ready to yell?
To, scream and shout?
We have a right,
It’s time for flight.

Birthday,
My,
Birthday,
My,
Birthday,

Yell and scream,
I’m now a teen,
Not a PRE
A real teen,
I feel as if a queen,
On a throne,
I have right!
Prepare for flight!
(Birthday!)

I’m here to say,
To sing away,
Cause it’s my,
Birrrrthdayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy………..
(Birthday!)
(Giggles)




((WOW! I can't believe I did that! I know immature foolish writing! But I all I can do is squeal! I hope I WIN!))


message 5: by ash ✈ (last edited Aug 05, 2016 07:57AM) (new)

ash ✈ (starlessnights) | 19 comments My birthdays coming up,
It's time to wake up,
To forget my problems,

Whoo cares what they say?
I don't have a delay,
Throw my problems out the way,
And walk.
Gonna move all the mountains,
In my way.
Cause it's my Birthday!

Praises come my way,
Fake people come to stay
Gonna throw them out my way,
Tonight,

Gonna groove to the beat,
As the worship at my feet,
Cause I'm awesome in every way,
Gonna feel like I'm high,
High enough to touch the sky.

It's my birthday,

Singing stupid songs,
As we dance like crazy people,
Gonna throw away my problems tonight,

Tonight I'm all game,
For the stupid things we do,
We're all crazy in,
Every way.

All problems off my hands,
I'm a free lady
Tonight.
I'm gonna have a blast,
I'll be the last who stands,

Gonna party like a queen,
Would.
Stay out of my way,
Awesome me is here to stay,
Throw my problems out the way
Tonight.
Cause it's my birthday,
I'm queen for the day,


It's.
My.
BIRTHDAY!

((Phew! I know! I suck. But we're just havin fun!))


message 6: by kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~, Music is my life. The lyrics are my story (new)

kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~ (percybluefood) | 528 comments Mod
Petitcroissant wrote: "((Just checking, we post our songs in this thread, correct?))"

((Yeah))


message 7: by Funky Fish (new)

Funky Fish (goodreadscompetitcroissant) Wow, everyone's songs are awesome!


message 8: by Liam (new)

Liam Ash ☼Daughter of the Sun & Moon☼ wrote: "My birthdays coming up,
It's time to wake up,
To forget my problems,

Whoo cares what they say?
I don't have a delay,
Throw my problems out the way,
And walk.
Gonna move all the mountains,
In my wa..."


Ash, that's amazing!!!


message 9: by ash ✈ (new)

ash ✈ (starlessnights) | 19 comments Liam ~Come, break me down. Bury me, bury me. I am finished with you~ wrote: "Ash ☼Daughter of the Sun & Moon☼ wrote: "My birthdays coming up,
It's time to wake up,
To forget my problems,

Whoo cares what they say?
I don't have a delay,
Throw my problems out the way,
And wal..."


Really? Thanks!


message 10: by kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~, Music is my life. The lyrics are my story (last edited Aug 06, 2016 12:47PM) (new)

kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~ (percybluefood) | 528 comments Mod
The Birthday Song


[Verse 1]
It’s your birthday today
And you are turning 17.
You were going to have a birthday party,
But no one showed up.

You were feeling sad.
You were staring at your phone,
With tears streaming down your cheeks.
Then, your best friend finally showed up.

[Chorus]
Then you two sang the Birthday song,
And had cake, and ice cream.
Then you both put music on,
And started dancing to it.

[Verse 2]
But then your best friend had to leave.
And after she left, you still kept dancing.
But it wasn’t fun without her.
But then your boyfriend showed up.

[Chorus]
Then you two sang the Birthday song,
And had cake, and Ice cream.
Then you both put music on,
And started dancing to it.

[Bridge]
After he left, you sighed to yourself and thought
“Maybe this is the best birthday after all.”
Then you sang the Birthday song (Yeah, the birthday song).
Oh, whoa, the Birthday song, Yeah!!!

[Chorus]
You sang the Birthday song,
And had cake, and Ice cream.
Then you put music on,
And started dancing to it.

[Ending]
Oh, whoa, oh
The birthday song.


((this isn't that good but oh well, at least I tried))


message 11: by ash ✈ (new)

ash ✈ (starlessnights) | 19 comments ((I'm confused? IS this a story within a song? if so IT'S GREAT!))


message 12: by kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~, Music is my life. The lyrics are my story (new)

kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~ (percybluefood) | 528 comments Mod
Ash ☼Daughter of the Sun & Moon☼ wrote: "((I'm confused? IS this a story within a song? if so IT'S GREAT!))"

((I guess XD thanks!))


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Ghoul Party

For people Who don't know,
It's my birthday, You can see why...
For those who had it all
Your soul is gonna Fall

(BREAK) For the music flowing to your mind
Island that awakens you for people who couldn't Find
And haters over there that's left behind, I just wanna let you know
it my birthday.
(BREAK) month number 10, day 22. Hater you are, there no cake for you. All the time, insult me, Join my Ghoul party, When people go crazy, not the ones that are Lazy.

Drinks are the same, Why you gotta be so lame?
This isn't a game, Ever heard my name, (no)

(BREAK) For the music flowing to your mind
Island that awakens you for people who couldn't Find
And haters over there that's left behind, I just wanna let you know
it my birthday.
(BREAK) month number 10, day 22. Hater you are, there no cake for you. All the time, insult me, Join my Ghoul party, When people go crazy, not the ones that are Lazy.

2 a.m and still going...
3 a.m and it's still chillin' your spine...

(BREAK) For the music flowing to your mind
Island that awakens you for people who couldn't Find
And haters over there that's left behind, I just wanna let you know
it my birthday.
(BREAK) month number 10, day 22. Hater you are, there no cake for you. All the time, insult me, Join my Ghoul party, When people go crazy, not the ones that are Lazy.

It's your turn now.

(( Wow. This song is a tribute to Halloween, Because my birthday is close to it.))


message 14: by kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~, Music is my life. The lyrics are my story (new)

kavi + alex + noir ~ve|vim~ (percybluefood) | 528 comments Mod
Phoenix Unfold: The Black Hole wrote: "
Ghoul Party


For people Who don't know,
It's my birthday, You can see why...
For those who had it all
Your soul is gonna Fall

(BREAK) For the music flowing to your mind
Island that awakens y..."


omg it's so good!!


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