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Share Your Work.. > our tears were just painted on: two poems

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T. Kozumplik | 16 comments I'd love to hear your feedback on two of my poems

RUMINATION
flowers
hours
colours running in the rain
see our tears were just painted on
do not mend the levy
I'd rather live in Atlantis
our ship is waiting
weighing shadows

flowers
hours
painted in rain
inside the shell
a song is being sung
I have stolen horses
let's race the planes
such horses
are too beautiful not to fly

ONE DAY THE WOLF WILL DEVOUR THE MOON

A storm of horses adorned with tears
the breath of Northern seas
the eye-rolling fates
this permanent twilight
of smothering snow
of glaring reflections
winter's teeth are left hanging on the eaves
icy fangs
froth frozen
stars too far to melt
thorns guarding no flowers
wolves lullaby the moon
life is so long
sit by the fire
gently fall to sleep


Best wishes,
TK

T. Kozumplik


message 2: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinbienvenue) Very beautiful poems, very well done. Excellent vocabulary and feeling of words really paint a visual into the mind.


message 3: by T. (new)

T. Kozumplik | 16 comments Thanks Justin- your words encourage me.


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