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message 1: by Mark (new)

Mark Giglio | 12 comments Have a 44k novella. Romance/ fantasy/thriller. Takes place on a jungle plateau in the Ecuadorian Amazon. Disillusioned protagonist Emilio, disheartened Alma, the patron's wife who finds solace and escape in the mystery of the jungle below and the aging patron Hector, who bullies the visiting engineer Emilio into a strange relationship with Alma. Elements of native mysticism and soul transference jealousy and escape. Fun for the literary minded. Specifics: character likability, pacing, use of poetry and some Spanish words and phrases. Regards, Mark

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Sharon Umbaugh | 381 comments Hmmm. Your synopsis captured my attention. Please visit my web site, The Writer's Reader about beta reading and editing services that I offer. Contact me at so we can exchange details. Thanks.

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