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message 1: by Sandy (new)

Sandy Frediani Jack’s Visit (96 words)
©2001 by Sandaidh

He crept silently through the night, making his way toward her as she slept. She was uncovered and lay deep in slumber. With a featherlight touch, he brushed her skin. His fingertips following her contours, tracing the gentle dips and swells of her body. She shivered in response, and he was pleased. He moved closer, caressing her, then eased himself over her, gathering her into his embrace. She welcomed him.

Sunrise and the coming day banished the evidence of his visit as the frost melted beneath its touch and the earth warmed once more.

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Heh. Going through this before hitting 'post,' I just removed 4 words taking it from the original 100 to 96.


message 2: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca Titillating.


message 3: by Sandy (new)

Sandy Frediani Rebecca wrote: "Titillating."

Thank you.


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