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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > 10 Chapters of a gritty YA/Teen Action Adventure/Thriller novel

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message 1: by Jireh (new)

Jireh Johnson | 7 comments Ive been working on a novel for a while and I really want feedback for the first 10 Chapters of the novel.

Synopsis:
Travis Kennedy, Thomas Colton, and Kelly Nicholson are mere outcasts, disposables, degenerates of a social hierarchy in the eyes of both staff and students alike in Twoson Boarding School.

After a shocking altercation, abandoning the abuse and rejection in pursuit of better lives seems like the best option for the three young protagonists.

But when the rest of earth rebels against the first world, events on a global scene shift from hostile to critically dangerous, and instantly the lives of Travis, Thomas, Kelly and a wave of new friends take a drastic turn.

In a time filled with bloodshed and chaos, is the world focusing in the wrong enemy? And as the global situation as a whole continues to deteriorate, will our young heroes hide in the shadows, or use their new power to rise up and fight?

WARNING!
This manuscript contains:
Extreme bullying, murder, language, kidnapping, torture, suicide, graphic violence, small pandas, raw sewage, cooked sewage, microwave-ready sewage, anime, true nightmares, surreal monstrosities, KISS KISS FALL IN LOVE, psychotic assassins, bald assassins, delusional ice fairies, fake tans, living on the edge, ridiculously strong punches, genocide crusades, partial nudity, succubi, floating panties, busty pink-haired schoolgirls, lewd manga, Siri, an overzealous teenage writer, and much more...

If you're interested you can respond below (Obviously) My email is Jirehzjohnson@gmail.com. I'm requesting seperate reviews for each chapter as well as questions, speculation, best scenes, emotional impact, loved/hated characters etc... You can send multiple or single reviews at once as long as they're properly distinguished.

Thanks for considering!


message 2: by Liliyana (new)

Liliyana Shadowlyn (lilydeslacs) I would be interested in helping you. Reviews for each chapter would not be a problem.


message 3: by Jireh (new)

Jireh Johnson | 7 comments Liliyana wrote: "I would be interested in helping you. Reviews for each chapter would not be a problem."

Great! do you have an email I can reach you with?


message 4: by Liliyana (new)

Liliyana Shadowlyn (lilydeslacs) l.r.shadowlyn@gmail.com


message 5: by Palmfire (new)

Palmfire | 30 comments I'd also be interested in checking out this story. I also saw that OHSHC joke you put in there. I am also writing a book with a similar nature (dark, gruesome, anime) and I would like to see if you would view the first few chapters. I am able to do chapter reviews too. I look forward to reading your book.


message 6: by Jireh (new)

Jireh Johnson | 7 comments Palmfire wrote: "I'd also be interested in checking out this story. I also saw that OHSHC joke you put in there. I am also writing a book with a similar nature (dark, gruesome, anime) and I would like to see if you..."

Great! What's your email?


message 7: by Palmfire (new)

Palmfire | 30 comments palmfire.firestorm@gmail.com. Sorry for the late reply, I forgot to turn on my nonfications.


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