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message 1: by Danielle (last edited Jun 27, 2016 12:02PM) (new)

Danielle | 125 comments Looking to swap full manuscripts with someone. I don't want to do chapter by chapter at this time as I'm looking for the opinion of the book as a whole. It does have some mature scenes. And is 72,000 words. Please message me or email me at daniellemathison07@gmail.com.

Here's a blurb:

I was a simple farm girl living in the magical land, Alyria, where men ruled and women only existed.
Call me sheltered. Call me naive. I was probably both. I never expected to be the key to Alyria's destruction.
The journey I was on wasn't only one to save me. But one where I had a lot of learning to do. With men. With magic. And with myself.
But I wasn't alone. No. I had an escort. One I wasn't so sure about. But one I couldn't afford to lose and one I wasn't so sure I could even leave.
I had many hopes. But the most important one was that my name wouldn't become my fate.

WARNING: This isn’t a sweet Cinderella story. This novel contains blood, violence, profanity, and some sexual content.

This story isn’t about a heroine that can take down five men with only her boot and a rock. The heroine is realistic.
It does end on a cliffhanger.



If you are looking for someone to beta read your manuscript in a couple days, I can do that.
Thanks.


message 2: by Karen (new)

Karen (kivrin) | 70 comments I am interested in swapping with my fantasy novel. I am rewriting the last few chapters of my story based on recent feedback but the rest is fairly polished and I'd like feedback on my rewrites.


message 3: by Danielle (new)

Danielle | 125 comments Ok Karen, go ahead and email me and we can swap first chapters to see if we will be a good fit?


message 4: by Karen (new)

Karen (kivrin) | 70 comments OMG Total fail. I didn't send you anything did I? Are you still interested?


message 5: by Danielle (new)

Danielle | 125 comments Lol yes. Still interested. You can email me here daniellemathison07@gmail. com
Thanks :)


message 6: by Garnell (new)

Garnell | 30 comments Hi Danielle,
I am looking for someone to beta read if you still have the interest and time. I have a 71,000 erotic paranormal romance novel and need some fresh eyes and opinions.

Thanks,
Garnell.


message 7: by Danielle (new)

Danielle | 125 comments Garnell wrote: "Hi Danielle,
I am looking for someone to beta read if you still have the interest and time. I have a 71,000 erotic paranormal romance novel and need some fresh eyes and opinions.

Thanks,
Garnell."


Sure, Garnell. Send me an email here daniellemathison07@gmail.com and we can swap.


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