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message 1: by Jim (last edited Jun 15, 2016 10:42PM) (new)

Jim Carnicelli (jimcarnicelli) | 71 comments Here's my second version of the cover for my forthcoming novel. I'm fairly happy with it so far, but I need some outside opinions.

Some questions for you. What is the setting? What do you suppose is happening? What do you like about this cover? What don't you like?

Note that I'm just starting to work on the tattoos on the woman's face. I plan to add similarly styled ones on the rest of her body. Work in progress.

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If you're interested in reading the incomplete novel, click here for the latest draft, updated almost daily.


message 2: by Hamad (new)

Hamad | 63 comments Maybe the setting is a futuristic world in another planet, and there are invasions and a search for liberty ....
I like how the colors blend in together
there is not something that I particularly hate but if I have to choose something I'd say it is the details that can become distracring


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