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message 1: by Rita (last edited Jun 14, 2016 09:54AM) (new)

Rita Stradling (stradling) | 21 comments This is actually for the sequel to Henchgirl, titled Rex. I can provide both books or Rex can be provided on its own.

I am searching for reader opinions ONLY. The book is being professionally edited. I just want to know if people dig it, what they like or don't like and if it keeps people's interest. I can provide any format of ebook. Warning: it is not edited, so there will be multiple typos and grammar mistakes. However, the story is complete.


Here is the Cover:



Blurb:

In seventeen year old Dakota Kekoa’s line of work, a job can go bad in a split second.

And when a job goes bad, people die.

Suspended from working as a tax collector in her draconic family’s protection racket, Dakota is assigned a secret mission from her grandfather. A foreign queen has offered a grave insult to Dakota’s grandfather by running a vampire dinner cruise off the coast of the Mabiian Islands, and his retribution must be swift.

Yet, when Dakota infiltrates the ship ‘Crimson Sunset’, nothing is at it seems. In a split second, not only is Dakota in deathly peril, all of New Anglo is on the road to war.


message 2: by Rita (new)

Rita Stradling (stradling) | 21 comments Henchgirl cover and blurb:



Blurb:

The children of dragons and humans, the dracons, control eighty percent of the world’s governments. Humans worldwide are either subservient or prey. On the small vacation island of Mabi, humans call for war.

Sixteen year old Dakota Kekoa lives a double life. By day, she pretends to be a human to infiltrate Mabi Academy, a 'humans only' high-school. At night, she works as a henchman for her draconic mafia family, utilizing her ability to steal and manipulate emotions.

When Dakota’s human friend is kidnapped, she takes on the mission to find her. This is not just any mission though; she is diving head first into the escalating conflict between humans and dracons. As more girls disappear and some are discovered dead, Dakota realizes her first honorable mission may also be her last.


message 3: by Katt (new)

Katt | 9 comments This sounds interesting. When would you need opinions by?


message 4: by Rita (new)

Rita Stradling (stradling) | 21 comments Katt wrote: "This sounds interesting. When would you need opinions by?"

Whenever works, the sooner the better but I don't expect the book to be completely final until September.


message 5: by Katt (new)

Katt | 9 comments I would be up for reading it. Do you have MOBI format? I haven't read the first one, so if you could send along both, that would be great. My email is kattarcher@gmail.com


message 6: by Rita (new)

Rita Stradling (stradling) | 21 comments Katt wrote: "I would be up for reading it. Do you have MOBI format? I haven't read the first one, so if you could send along both, that would be great. My email is kattarcher@gmail.com"

Sent. Thank you so much!!!!!!


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