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The Seven Stones of the Chakra - Part I
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Emma
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May 08, 2014 05:24PM
Hey everyone, I am new to the 'Young Writers' group on Goodreads and cannot wait to start receiving feedback on my writing, as well as helping fellow writers to improve their craft. If anyone has any time to spare, I would really appreciate someone to read the first chapter of my novel, and tell me what they liked but more importantly how it could be improved. Thanks :) https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
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Ooooo, I read the blurb, and it sounds really cool! I am in no account a professional writer/editor/critic, but I'll read it and let you know what I think :)
Hi there Christina :) Thank you very much for your feedback I really appreciate it, especially for telling me specific phrases that you liked. And thanks for the comment about formating my paragraphs as I hadn't given much thought to that side of my writing. Other than my sister you are the first person to read my work which means a lot to me. If you would like me to read through any of your writing I would be more than happy to!
I'm so glad you appreciated my feedback! I'll totally let you know if I need anything looked over. :)
Here is my next chapter from 'The Seven Stones of the Chakra' :) https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
Here is a link to the whole of Part I of my novel 'The Seven Stones of the Chakra', hope you enjoy :) Please feel free to comment https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
