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message 1: by Ema (new)

Ema (gee-fiera) I was about to comment I sentence length when I saw your note!

Other than that, this is excellent! I would have liked a tad more description of what the wreckage looks like, but as this is an RP reply, there's probably not much you can do there.


message 2: by Ema (new)

Ema (gee-fiera) Yeah, I agree! It's really good for the constraints RP puts on writing, though.


message 3: by Ema (new)

Ema (gee-fiera) Yep! You'll get there!


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