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message 1: by kaya (last edited Jun 10, 2016 05:37PM) (new)

kaya (ananats) | 39 comments
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Uhh...it's perfect. It mightn't be phrased perfectly, but that doesn't affect the story, so it doesn't matter. And I love the idea, it's amazing.



message 2: by marthie ! (new)

marthie ! (marthie) | 17 comments this plot is really good! I've never seen now you see me before and I don't know if it's semi-dystopian like this is, but even if it's not I like this story. plus I really like the phrasing of it.


message 3: by Ema (new)

Ema (gee-fiera) I've been wanting to see those movies! :)


message 4: by Ema (new)

Ema (gee-fiera) Oh I'll have to go see it then :)


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