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message 1: by Lenna (new)

Lenna  Wright-Berry  (paranormal_lover) | 10 comments I'm looking for betas that loves to read. I would love help from a readers view to help make this story even better. Dream Mates is a complete Paranormal Romance novel, 71k+ words, 18+, mostly one p.o.v. This is my debut novel. Its not printed book but a ebook.

Blurb
Can you be able to find true soul mated love in your dreams?
Tala is your average shy full figured curvy woman that is a housewife, girl next door type, and over all a nice person.
But what happens when Karma takes Fates out the window of life when Tala is bitten, dying, and changed into something that has not been heard of for hundreds of years. yee naaldlooshii’ or Skin Walker and a very old ancestry, Tala is not what the legends all say, she is NOT a killer.
Tala is put to the test when she is kidnapped and held against her will by a rival pack of werewolves that are out for new blood.
Sani lives when towns were small villages and Native American had land as far as the eye can see. The Nordic werewolf lives as an early version of a playboy, until Tala is transported back in time through her dreams and is met with this stranger.
Sani and Tala will be experiencing a connection that takes generations to be one with each other as true soul mates are meant to be.

Please if your interested, message me on here at goodreads or email me at chevygal1981@hotmail.com, and plase put 'Beta' in subject line. Thank you for your time and consideration


message 2: by Lenna (new)

Lenna  Wright-Berry  (paranormal_lover) | 10 comments Did I post this right??? Im new to all of this, I'm looking for advice on posting in beta reading groups


message 3: by Kathy (new)

Kathy Golden | 298 comments Mod
Lenna wrote: "Did I post this right??? Im new to all of this, I'm looking for advice on posting in beta reading groups"

Hi, Lenna,

Your posting is right. How old are your romance characters?


message 4: by Lenna (new)

Lenna  Wright-Berry  (paranormal_lover) | 10 comments Kathy wrote: "Lenna wrote: "Did I post this right??? Im new to all of this, I'm looking for advice on posting in beta reading groups"

Hi, Lenna,

Your posting is right. How old are your romance characters?"


The age is mid to late 20s


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