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message 1: by tired (last edited Jun 27, 2017 09:40PM) (new)

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━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ INTRODUCTION

▸ mei, xvi, intj
▸ usa
▸ female, she/her, bisexual
▸ kind of shit at writing


INFORMATION ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━

▸ shitty poetry/words/prose at 5 a.m
▸ trigger warnings will be properly placed
▸ no plagiarism or i'll kick your ass
▸ find me on tumblr at heartrenders and hecaites



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when he died
the gods should have placed him
among the stars
not forgotten
in the ground.

— the gods were unkind to you / j.m



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AUTHOR'S NOTE

the following poems are short, informal pieces i wrote in a tragic state of heartache this summer. very informal, shortened words / incorrect grammar and spelling to fit the overall aesthetic and vibe of this collection. i typed these up on the notes on my phone. abt an unnamed girl that i loved / love this past year.



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two lovers thru a foggy window
she leans in for a kiss, waiting
god i wish i had a love like that ! a love where i
can kiss a girl in public without
hateful stares and judgmental gazes
politely looking away as if my love for a girl is
something dirty
he kisses her back and they drive away
in love and no one questions it



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i still find pieces of u in my heart some days
some days i cant forget and the memories
come flooding in
i held ur heart in my hands and i let it rot
the heartache is worse at nights
i miss ur body next to mine
pure happiness was dreaming next to u
now theres an empty space next to me
and i am alone in bitterness trying to
fucking forget



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maybe one day ull move on n forget abt me
fuck u for ignoring me
but i cant help n luv u until it hurts my heart
my first lover i feel a crushing sadness
and a nostalgia for memories that never
happened
lover dd u ever even love me
did u feel the same joy in ur chest
that i did whenever
i woke up to u next to me
did u stop breathing like i did
when we kissed
i thought u were so beautiful
but now i only see sadness
in our souls and an unspoken anger



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the days melt into each other
nd we havent talked in a week
maybe u hate me maybe i hate u
days go on n i feel the summer drowsiness
take me and
u still havent texted back !
is this what real heartbreak is



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love hasnt been fair to me
i want a refund
love wasnt supposed to do this
make me cry and make me sick
love is supposed to make u dizzy
w happiness
not nausea and anxiety
ive been crying a lot lately
maybe love just isnt
for
me



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tired | 197 comments
u hurt me and u wont admit it
ignored texts and one word answers
broke my heart
maybe i hurt u too but love is blinding
and we dont admit it bc we cant admit
we hurt and we hurt and we hurt
and u still wont talk to me
and i wont talk to u
this is how it ends



message 18: by tired (last edited Jun 27, 2017 09:54PM) (new)

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u havent told me u loved me in a while
but i guess thats what happens
when love burns out
will r luv fade until it didnt even exist?
will u forget my favorite color
and the way i said ur name
will i not be able to recall
the shape of ur mouth
that i wld kiss
and the way u laughed
one day?



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love made me stupid dumb
im a fucking idiot for thinking
that love made me happy or some shit
it just came crashing down on me
and fucking crushed me (congrats bitch!)
thanks a fucking lot
im still depressed !



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the heaviness of summer's got me feeling
more tired than ever
sun-kissed skin more like washed out
dull and grey
stench of sweat makes me sick
too many spiders, too much time
to do nothing but live w myself
this poet's run out of words
come back soon



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tired | 197 comments these r so ugly im gonna SCREAM


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DREAM JOURNAL: 4. HEARTACHE IS A MYTH

In this dream there’s a story.
A different ending where I stay for once
and you forgive me and I forgive you.
It is 3 a.m. and we sit in an endless field.
We are healed, weightless.
In this dream all the hurt vanished.
The heartache is a myth.
I still love her.

A bomb is going to blow up in my face,
but I smile anyway because she is here.
I feel nothing but joy until I wake up
with tears and an aching longing
pulling at my heart.



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CHERRY RED

Summer girl is sad &
trapped in her usual melancholy.
Summer poetry and
melted cherry popsicles (red was yr favorite)
She’s tearing her own heart out
w a bloody fist and bruised knuckles.

She loves me / she loves me not.
I am exhausted from guessing.
Time is murky, slow, never-ending.
Please just let me know if I ever cross
your mind anymore.



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tired | 197 comments


           inspired by brokeback mountain (2005)



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sel (lvagirl) | 148 comments jAACCK????

ROSE????


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tired | 197 comments this isnt a heterosexual poem


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tired | 197 comments jack twist and ennis del mar bitch!


message 28: by sel (new)

sel (lvagirl) | 148 comments ennis


message 29: by tired (new)

tired | 197 comments and what about it


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sel (lvagirl) | 148 comments howdy


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