Light, fun, contemporary romantic comedy of 80k words

[Rich]

Hi there. Thanks for stopping by! :)

I'm hoping to find a few beta readers who LOVE comedy and romance. My story is heavy on the fun and light on drama. There is no explicit sex, but there is adult language. And, of course, there is a happy ending!

I'm not looking for someone to correct typos and grammar problems. I'm looking for inconsistencies in the story. And maybe there is a part you feel should be expanded or trimmed. Most importantly, I would like to know the parts that were slow to you, where you had the urge to skim. This is huge, since I want this to be a fun and fast read for everyone.

Important to know: I'm on a tight deadline—since I had three beta readers flake on me—so I would need to get feedback from you by Thursday, May 15th. Sorry for such restrictions, but I hope you can help. If you love romantic comedies, please send me a message.

If you are an author who writes romantic comedies, please send me a message. Maybe we can help each other. :)

Thanks in advance for your help! I truly appreciate it.

[Elly]

I've had some flakiness with readers too but also some good ones. If you're interested in exploring a swap then send me a PM or email me at ellyloughlin(at)gmail(dotcom)

[Rich]

Sounds good, I'll do that. Thanks!

I should clarify that the flaky beta readers were not from Goodreads.