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Smolder McBadassery

I guess it goes back to the bad boy concept. A character you just know needs to be saved but he get drawn into his mystery instead. It's hard for me to put into words. Sure, there's badass, byronic, etc, but that doesn't seem to do it justice. And sometimes fits this type perfectly without being byronic.
"Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn."
A man with a backbone is such a turn-on. If he's mysterious in an interesting way, that just adds to the turn on. It's just.... so freaking cool.
Mickey Royrke played this type really well, and in a way, still does, despite the mess his face has become. Marv in Sin City, what a fantastic character. The ugliest son of bitch with a massive heart of pure gold. Yet still smoldering and still a badass.
This type is both frustrating and thrilling, and I find myself simply going along with the ride.
Omg - I love SinCity because every guy was like that, all stupid and noble over a dame. And then they're putting Joseph Gordon-Levitt in the sequel? PfhD! That's a fantasy factory opening up in August.
That movie is a horrible case of "take my money, damnit". I love the brutal poetry in Sin City.
I'm relatively certain Smolder has brothers called Skulker and Swoony since not all these McBadasserys are brooders but lurkers and shaming what guys do cause they're written usually by women.
Going with that "women write them so this must be what women want" angle, I agree that confidence and charm are so great for flipping pages. In real life, I'd want a guy less dramatic/tortured and more stable but for a story characters need to generate action and provoke reactions. Like a difference between an attractive idea and a real life hot-mess.
Yes, the McBadasserys. You are the presidents of Urban Fantasy and princes of Paranormal Romance.
I'm relatively certain Smolder has brothers called Skulker and Swoony since not all these McBadasserys are brooders but lurkers and shaming what guys do cause they're written usually by women.
Going with that "women write them so this must be what women want" angle, I agree that confidence and charm are so great for flipping pages. In real life, I'd want a guy less dramatic/tortured and more stable but for a story characters need to generate action and provoke reactions. Like a difference between an attractive idea and a real life hot-mess.
Yes, the McBadasserys. You are the presidents of Urban Fantasy and princes of Paranormal Romance.

Anyway, for me, characters like Indiana Jones (before the franchise was ruined) and Humphrey Bogart are great inspiration. Characters in Sin City take the gold.
But as far as I'm concerned, the grand first place will always go to Steve McQueen - the ultimate smoldering badass.

Plug away! I'm calling my variation of this "the Dark Stranger" so it's like I'm not even trying to hide it lolz...ah, thank god it's the type of book that lets me get away with being so on the nose.
Your character should be right at home in a thriller. Anything gritty needs a man with grit :D
I wonder if people write such characters because they make a conscious decision, like the story demands or they know it sells? If they just unconsciously love the archetype and it manifests in?
It's probably a combination and doesn't matter since the point is that this character type resonates and more readers like him than hate him. I know readers will gripe about anything that isn't straight out of the box original (and even then...) but most people appreciate an old trick done well.
Like I was browsing books and came across an assortment of Twilight clones, which reviewers acknowledged either as a statement of fact or expression of disdain. My reactions was "what's so wrong with that" since there's only so many ways a paranormal romance in high school can set up or play out.
Think of a chocolate chip bag cookie recipe - inspired? No. Reliable? Yes. Satisfying? Generally so long as you don't overdo it or get negligent.
I feel the McBadassarys are always popping up in these "generic" books and might be the reason they achieve any notoriety or success. Edward was - to me - an intriguing character, which pulled me into the first Twilight book. If he wasn't all sparkly I wouldn't have kept up with the series to see what other charm it had so - yeah - these characters, for all their cliches, are the saving grace of some novels.
Your character should be right at home in a thriller. Anything gritty needs a man with grit :D
I wonder if people write such characters because they make a conscious decision, like the story demands or they know it sells? If they just unconsciously love the archetype and it manifests in?
It's probably a combination and doesn't matter since the point is that this character type resonates and more readers like him than hate him. I know readers will gripe about anything that isn't straight out of the box original (and even then...) but most people appreciate an old trick done well.
Like I was browsing books and came across an assortment of Twilight clones, which reviewers acknowledged either as a statement of fact or expression of disdain. My reactions was "what's so wrong with that" since there's only so many ways a paranormal romance in high school can set up or play out.
Think of a chocolate chip bag cookie recipe - inspired? No. Reliable? Yes. Satisfying? Generally so long as you don't overdo it or get negligent.
I feel the McBadassarys are always popping up in these "generic" books and might be the reason they achieve any notoriety or success. Edward was - to me - an intriguing character, which pulled me into the first Twilight book. If he wasn't all sparkly I wouldn't have kept up with the series to see what other charm it had so - yeah - these characters, for all their cliches, are the saving grace of some novels.

Go stand in the corner.
Kidding. Having read the books myself, I do see the appeal and in my opinion I think it started as a great idea. But the character's dialogue made me cringe at times, at least for me and wonder why the hell Bella didn't just call the police.
Courtney, in all honesty, I had nothing in mind when the character came out of nowhere and started writing himself. All I knew was in order to finish this story, somebody is going to have to kick some serious ass. I'm just lucky the character agreed.

I like the bad boy but I want him to not get whiny as the story progresses (which is what I felt happened to Edward). It's one thing for him to develop conflicting feelings. I just watched all of Dexter and that's a perfect example. His creation of a family and his understanding of the importance of the people in his life was a great arc. He struggled with balancing the two halves of his life but he didn't whine. He never allowed himself to be the victim. He struggled and he fought.
Some authors lose that strength when the going gets tough.


I think the appeal is McBadassey's need to be "saved" from himself. There's something very intoxicating in the notion of being someone's portal to redemption or inspiring them to be a better man.
Also, pain makes us real, and McBadassey has usually written the book on pain. I think women who are drawn to sensitivity but aren't attracted to the sugary-sweet pop song of the church altarboy or the nice next-door neighbor find the sensitivity that comes with the dark, tortured badass having gone through intense emotional pain an enticing characteristic.

Oh, you have emotional baggage sir? Let me help you with that while you concentrate on taking off that shirt.
That's the crux of it.
That's the crux of it.

Also, pain makes us real, and McBadassey has usually written the book on pain. I think women who are drawn to sensitivity but aren't attracted to the sugary-sweet pop song of the church altarboy or the nice next-door neighbor find the sensitivity that comes with the dark, tortured badass having gone through intense emotional pain an enticing characteristic."
This, basically.
I like them hard and crunchy on the outside, soft and chewy on the inside. Never whiny, but he'll shed tears at the thought of losing his woman. Tough and strong, will do what has to be done, but would never hurt anyone who doesn't need to be hurt.
Also, I wish I had thought of the name "Smolder McBadassery." :-D

In this world, it takes a lot of courage to admit that. I like him too. Though I'm glad you said it first. I'm not as brave.
Smolder, you are free to go but your pants must stay so your author might allude to the mirth and girth associated with your Johnsonhood.


Hmmm...that's an interesting thought. I wonder what would be the ideal match for the female character? Granted, there aren't a lot of "male savior" characters in literature in this context; at least, not that I've come across.

However, every time Hook from Once Upon A Time opens his mouth, I pretty much spontaneously ovulate.
Every time.
Benedict Cumberbatch. Him as Sherlock is just...I want to go 50 Shades on him.
But yeah, I've actually wondered if I should write a female counterpart to Smolder. Wonder how she would go over.
But yeah, I've actually wondered if I should write a female counterpart to Smolder. Wonder how she would go over.

Dark, dangerous, and gritty only works if he slips up and show his heart of gold every once in a while. (Otherwise he's just a sociopath.)

I guess I can say I don't know *how* to write a Smolder McBadassery type of character since I have nothing to base off of (without veering into mary sue territory). I don't know if I've accidentally wrote any Smolder McBadassery types. (No one's read my stuff, so I have no clue). But I'll file that 'research more' and see what I can find. A few books with that archtype





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Girl's Guide to Witchcraft (other topics)Marked by Passion (other topics)
He is often a stranger with a piercing gaze and mysterious past. His backstory is as hard and edgy as his chiseled abs. He is tall, dark and snarky. He is as intense an enemy as he is a lover. Courtship begins with stalking and ends in roiling ecstacy. He goes by many names - like Colt Prescott or Dante Morte - but we all know him as...
...Smolder McBadassery.
How many stories have we read with a guy matching this description? I'm not knocking him because he's a great character with the right bells and whistles! A byronic hero with sharp dialogue is a dynamic, entrancing protagonist/love interest.
So Fringe Folks - why is this character compelling and/or popular?
No bashing please. Constructive criticism is cool but Smolder commands our attention and demands our respect because - frankly - his presence in books is the only reason some women bother reading.
Props Smolder - you make singlehood suck less by being fantasy fodder.