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Writing and Self-Promotion > Sex! Well, sex scenes, I suck at at writing them.

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Cassandra Stryffe | 33 comments Working on a second draft of a book I wrote a few years ago. I penciled in a a sex scene that needs to be there for story/character development. But it's really bad. Almost laughably bad.

Is there anyone who'd be willing to read it and red pen it to death for me?


Cassandra Stryffe | 33 comments Oh! That's awesome Kamil! Thank you!


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Maggie Cameron | 3 comments Holy bovine, that is wonderful ... danke, Kamil!


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Rebekah | 28 comments Can I recommend Steaming Up your Love Scenes by Emma Holly? It's short and useful.


Cassandra Stryffe | 33 comments Cassandra wrote: "Oh! That's awesome Kamil! Thank you!"


Yeah gotta love an article that contains the sentence : But “John laid Mary gently on the bed and they did it missionary style and it was nice” does not sell 1/1,000,000th as many copies as “Mr. Gray beat a clumsy teenage girl with a garden hose and then stuck it in her armpit with a scoop of pizza sauce to lubricate.”

I seriously nearly choked I laughed so hard


Cassandra Stryffe | 33 comments Rebekah wrote: "Can I recommend Steaming Up your Love Scenes by Emma Holly? It's short and useful."

Thank you Rebekah!


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