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Edward Jamieson (edwardjamieson) | 127 comments Hi everyone.
I gave my new book to an editor. Now I have it back, but I need a beta read to make clear whether there are still issues or not, if it sounds English.

Synopsis: Jonathan wakes up in a desert, his past wiped from his head. He’s alone having no clue who and what he is, where he has come from and where he should go. There is only one way – forward when he spots a little town in the distance.
Empty streets, old houses, the town seems abandoned. There’s no one to ask for help, there’s nowhere to go. Jonathan wanders the town in search of any sign of life trying to bring his lost memories back, but odd visions haunt him from time to time. Soon Jonathan comes to the realization that he’s moments from death as absolutely evil dwells in the town seeking fresh souls to suck up. The seemingly dead town is only outwardly empty.
Grey skies, no sun, no days and no nights. The town is stuck in time. With only one entrance and one exit, but the way leading to the exit is filled with creations that Jonathan has never envisioned, even in his worst nightmares.
Who is he? Who brought him here? With a female resident – Elizabeth, Jonathan has to work his way through the horrendous town, figure out his past and find the exit.

Who can help me? I need somebody to read two or three chapters and give me an opinion.

Thank you.

message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi Suran, my name is Jackie. I would be happy to read the three chapters of your book. I too had a book published and I need someone to give me their opinion.

message 3: by Edward (new)

Edward Jamieson (edwardjamieson) | 127 comments Hi Jacqueline.
Thank you for trying to help me with my book, I appreciate that. I'll be pleased to send you the first three chapters of my oncoming book to read and hear your opinion about grammar and issues (if there is one, as my editor works hard to make it as perfect as she can).
The problem is that English isn't my native language. I've already published two short stories, but editing short story is much easier than a novel.
Please, send me your email address.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi Suren:
Your welcome. It's very nice to meet you! My e-mail adress is Would you be interested in reading and reviewing my book? It's called In The Hands Of Fate and it came out on February 12th of this year.Sometimes I think I am too close to my own stories to objectively look at them as someone who has never seen them.

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