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This is a good entry, though I'll say that I noted in my review for the book that I felt this was incongruous with the other novels he's written, style wise. I mean, beyond the setting and animals and such, the writing style is just a bit different.

And I started a series just now.


I adored the first few chapters introducing everyone (and even stopped to read large chunks of intro aloud to my husband, especially Bonsoir's set-up). A bit further past the intros now, though, I'm finding it a little more difficult to keep track of everyone.

I've just finished the early recruitment stuff, and am finding it pretty 'bitty' at the moment. The short chapters worked better for me when they signified a time jump as well.
Looking forward to seeing the team in action...



The recruitment was pretty cool, but I'm wondering if there might be too many characters.
Looking like it will be The Expendables with animals.
Also:
"The mouse is a curious animal. He is small and weak. If he is not slow, he is slower than the cat, the fox, and the owl, his natural predators - which is to say he is not nearly fast enough. His claws and teeth are fragile things, unsuited for violence. Generally speaking he cannot even blend in to his surroundings. In short, the mouse is perhaps the single most helpless animal on earth, blessed with nary a resource to defend himself against the cruel privations of a savage world.
Save one - the mouse knows it. The mouse is too feeble to cling to any illusions of safety. From the instant he leaves the flesh of the womb, he knows his life is there for the taking, and he grows cagey, and sharp. He sees the goshawk above him, sniffs out the polecat lurking in the shadows.
All of which is to say that when the rat leveled his sawed-off shotgun the Captain was already moving, kicking his chair backward and falling with it, the load of buckshot passing swiftly through the space he had occupied and nestling itself into Zapata's ripe and unsuspecting chest. The Captain had meanwhile shaken a holdout pistol from the sleeve of his coat, and he used the first two of its chambers to make sure his would-be assassin would not have time to regret the mistake.
The rat staggered into a corner, counting down its last breaths. The Captain turned his weapon on Zapata, though he realized swiftly that the armadillo no longer presented a threat."