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message 1: by Martin (new)

Martin Cubas | 9 comments Hello. Here is the first chapter of my Manuscript. Happy to receive any comments or suggestions. Thanks!

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message 2: by Sanne (new)

Sanne (sanlily195) I really like your writing so far. I haven't read all of it yet, but I sure plan on doing so.
I think it might be a good idea to try to change the first line a bit, since I find it a bit long and 'from a balcony in the mansion' just doesn't seem right. Then again, I'm not the best writer myself haha.
Looking forward to reading more :)


message 3: by Martin (new)

Martin Cubas | 9 comments Thank you for your comment. I will post the next chapter in a few days.


message 4: by Sanne (new)

Sanne (sanlily195) I'm looking forward to it :)


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

22 PAGES! I'm dying to know what happens next!


message 6: by Martin (new)

Martin Cubas | 9 comments So, you liked it? :-)


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes!


message 8: by Martin (new)

Martin Cubas | 9 comments oh. Good :-) I plan to post my draft of Chapter 2 on Wednesday


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