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message 1: by Lizzy (new)

Lizzy post your adventure poems here!


message 2: by Lizzy (new)

Lizzy Even the tallest Mountains crumble;
Beneath the travelers feet;
even the largest rivers tumble;
Into the ocean deep;

Even winter melts to spring;
When you've given up your hope;
The flowers bloom and sing;
quitting their awful mope;

every story has its ending;
Whether good or bad it be;
but its always worth pretending;
of that we cannot see;


JustAnotherConverseLovinGurl I love this!


message 4: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 188 comments Mod
call me crazy and be done with it. wrote: "Even the tallest Mountains crumble;
Beneath the travelers feet;
even the largest rivers tumble;
Into the ocean deep;

Even winter melts to spring;
When you've given up your hope;
The flowers bloom ..."


LOVE it!


message 5: by Lizzy (new)

Lizzy awh,thanks! :D


message 6: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 188 comments Mod
call me crazy and be done with it. wrote: "awh,thanks! :D"


You welcome [:



message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

OH MY GOD...thats amazing!!!=D


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