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message 1: by Kylematsen (new) - rated it 4 stars
Dec 03, 2015 08:51AM

Kylematsen In dialogue what you want to focus on is what is being said and how its being said and by who. A part of the book with really deep tone is when Jade, rocky and the main character are all in the school and Rocky is chasing down Jade so she won't tell anybody about the steroids.


message 2: by Josh (new) - rated it 4 stars
Dec 03, 2015 10:13AM

Josh Fader I agree that the tone in the dialogue could really put the reader in the moment and understand the fear of Jade during this part of the book.


message 3: by Kylematsen (new) - rated it 4 stars
Dec 04, 2015 08:47AM

Kylematsen Its a very intense part of the book and the tone and the actual words being said just keep you on the edge of your seat


message 4: by Josh (new) - rated it 4 stars
Dec 04, 2015 10:19AM

Josh Fader I very much agree that it was a quite riveting part and you were nervous for Jade


message 5: by Josh (new) - rated it 4 stars
Dec 04, 2015 10:25AM

Josh Fader *it made people feel nervous for Jade


message 6: by Josh (new) - added it
Dec 14, 2015 08:03AM

Josh Sanders I agree that the tone in the dialogue could really put the reader in the moment and understand the fear of Jade during this part of the book.


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