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Kylematsen In dialogue what you want to focus on is what is being said and how its being said and by who. A part of the book with really deep tone is when Jade, rocky and the main character are all in the school and Rocky is chasing down Jade so she won't tell anybody about the steroids.


Josh Fader I agree that the tone in the dialogue could really put the reader in the moment and understand the fear of Jade during this part of the book.


Kylematsen Its a very intense part of the book and the tone and the actual words being said just keep you on the edge of your seat


Josh Fader I very much agree that it was a quite riveting part and you were nervous for Jade


Josh Fader *it made people feel nervous for Jade


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Josh Sanders I agree that the tone in the dialogue could really put the reader in the moment and understand the fear of Jade during this part of the book.


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