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message 1: by Nurr (new)

Nurr Shahidna | 24 comments Mod
Please post your rhyming poem about either:

a) a character in your book or
b) about the book itself.

Your poem should be at least 8 lines.


message 2: by Wilbert (new)

Wilbert | 26 comments My book is called "Oliver Twist" written by Oliver Twist. This is a poem about the book...

Born without a father, And told about a dead mother. There has been no room for comfort. And humiliation made up his last resort. The rich sits in clubs drinking wine But the poor lacked even what to dine. Life was never easy on the street. As there was nothing to eat. And as for me, Iam never giving up. Yes! Not until I hit the very top.

That is the end of my poem....btw it took me about 5 minutes to type this idk why also the last 2 sentences doesn't really connect to the story I just lack 2 more sentences so I made it up tbh


message 3: by Winston (new)

Winston | 16 comments my book is about murder by art, written by jannet mc griffin(btw this not the book i read this week) about lillian hochstedder

Money money money
It always make me happy
How are these people so stupid
I sell human skull for profit

People say I'm a murderer
But I'm no torturer
I am just an ordinary woman
Who loves to eat lemon


message 4: by Fido (new)

Fido | 23 comments My book is Dead heads.

Dick Elgood

Dick is bad
He likes to be mad
He is old
But not bold

He wears a tie
And I like to spy on him
Oh Dick
You're such a Dick


message 5: by Ian (new)

Ian | 23 comments my book is decline and fall

Failed Honestly

Bla bla bla bla bla
Comes the noise from the bar
Spread through the walls
Shows the drunken balls

The man sat alone
Enjoy not enjoy the home
Visit by the old mind
The man can't be kind

Just like a storm
It wasn't warm
Running around in naked
And got expelled

Honestly was betrayed
It wasn't defended
The only way is just escaped
Self isn't protected

Here's me come lame
The same but not the same
The win but the lose
He’s the only way to choose


message 6: by Alin (new)

Alin Kinan (caratskk982) | 12 comments The Meteor

I came to this world
To live
But everybody in this world
Don't believe

I'm too small, I'm too tiny.
But that will never stop me.
I survive, I'm alive.
But 1 second later I lose my life.


message 7: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 28, 2015 09:17AM) (new)

My book is The Joy Luck Club. The Joy Luck Club by Clare West

The Chinese girl, Jing Mei
Her mother once say
She's not her only daughter,
that she had an affair after

Her mother's name is Suyuan Woo
She was a strong woman and a good mother who
always loved her children
but now she had already gone to Heaven


message 8: by Reuben (new)

Reuben Chiang | 12 comments My book is American Crime Stories and my poem is about a character named Chris.

Chris

Chris is very rich,
But he is a witch.
He divorced his wife
And screwed his life.

He is old, fit and tall
And doesn’t like to go to the mall.
He likes to lie,
And I want him to die.


Michellechartanto | 19 comments He's so full of pride
With his nose held high
He looks so rude
But he never told a lie

A girl who's brave
Dressed like a boy was her fave
She didn't want to get married
But her mother insisted

One day these two souls met
He fell in love before
But his love wont be returned just yet
Will he prove her prejudice wrong?


Michellechartanto | 19 comments He's so full of pride
With his nose held high
He looks so rude
But he never told a lie

A girl who's brave
Dressed like a boy was her fave
She didn't want to get married
But her mother insisted

One day these two souls met
He fell in love before
But his love wont be returned just yet
Will he prove her prejudice wrong?


message 11: by R. (new)

R. Eagan | 21 comments My book I used to make the poem was The Enemy.

Benson The Butler

Benson was old and gritty
Yet he was old and witty
The old fool was a loyal spy
But that caused the rusty man to drool and die

He served the family loyally
Even making them think doubtfully
Fleeing with his old master to Sweden
To kill his masters maiden


message 12: by Teresa (new)

Teresa A | 16 comments Jane Eyre

The life of a girl who seems
As plain as a person can be.
Yet this lonely girl still dreams
About living life happily

Many a trial and sadness
Jane Eyre did meet in her life
Yet will this strong governess
Find happiness in the midst of strife?


message 13: by Wienda (new)

Wienda Nurhanie | 17 comments Better late than never

Anika the cheerful girl
Zaphira the queen of ice
They're so different, yet
for friendship, they'll sacrifice

They stay together
for good and bad
when Anika was hurt
Zaphira gets mad


message 14: by Ancilla.M (new)

Ancilla.M | 15 comments A Passage To India

A story of two government
The Indians and the British
Both equally strong
Yet equally selfish

A tale of two countries
So greedy of land
With tricks up their sleeves
Setting up everyone they can

A passage to India
A journey to freedom
I read this book
Almosy died of boredom


message 15: by JasmineF (new)

JasmineF | 20 comments Night without End

The cold weather could kill any man.
But the journey just began.

There is one pilot.
But he is already dead.
He got a bullet in his back.

Why was there a place crash?
Why was the bullet in his back?

A lot of questions ran through my mind.

I havent finish reading the book.
But after this poem, I am sure you want to take a look.


message 16: by JasmineF (new)

JasmineF | 20 comments Night without End

The cold weather could kill any man.
But the journey just began.

There is one pilot.
But he is already dead.
He got a bullet in his back.

Why was there a place crash?
Why was the bullet in his back?

A lot of questions ran through my mind.

I havent finish reading the book.
But after this poem, I am sure you want to take a look.


message 17: by JasmineF (new)

JasmineF | 20 comments Night without End

The cold weather could kill any man.
But the journey just began.

There is one pilot.
But he is already dead.
He got a bullet in his back.

Why was there a place crash?
Why was the bullet in his back?

A lot of questions ran through my mind.

I havent finish reading the book.
But after this poem, I am sure you want to take a look.


message 18: by Silvia (new)

Silvia Anggraini | 42 comments Mss i made three in case you dont like the other two..

Windows of the mind
Made by frank brennan
A fine wine
This book is mine

A nose for a story
Arlo's war
Did read the story
Feel like going to mars

Next....

Roses are red
Violets are blue
This book makes me bored
So as this poem too

Rainbow are colourful
Grass is green
This book is full
Full of my face's grin

Last...

A guys lost his sense
Sense of smelling
He lied about nonsense
He can't smell a thing

He got fired
His boss got angry
His face got red
He lost his bravery


message 19: by Silvia (new)

Silvia Anggraini | 42 comments Mss i made three in case you dont like the other two..

Windows of the mind
Made by frank brennan
A fine wine
This book is mine

A nose for a story
Arlo's war
Did read the story
Feel like going to mars

Next....

Roses are red
Violets are blue
This book makes me bored
So as this poem too

Rainbow are colourful
Grass is green
This book is full
Full of my face's grin

Last...

A guys lost his sense
Sense of smelling
He lied about nonsense
He can't smell a thing

He got fired
His boss got angry
His face got red
He lost his bravery


message 20: by Silvia (new)

Silvia Anggraini | 42 comments Mss i made three in case you dont like the other two..

Windows of the mind
Made by frank brennan
A fine wine
This book is mine

A nose for a story
Arlo's war
Did read the story
Feel like going to mars

Next....

Roses are red
Violets are blue
This book makes me bored
So as this poem too

Rainbow are colourful
Grass is green
This book is full
Full of my face's grin

Last...

A guys lost his sense
Sense of smelling
He lied about nonsense
He can't smell a thing

He got fired
His boss got angry
His face got red
He lost his bravery


message 21: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 22: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 23: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 24: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 25: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 26: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 27: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 28: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 29: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 30: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his responsibility

Don in a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 31: by Atharva (new)

Atharva | 32 comments Its your lies that we despise
and the coldness in your eyes
while ignoring tortured cries
of the poor that u chastise

You affect an air candour
when you're spouting propaganda
and ur lies are far more sinister
than ur sucking pig,prime minister


message 32: by Jason29 (new)

Jason29 | 16 comments My book is called Death In Dojo, and here is the poem.

The book contains tons of violence.
All the victims scream in horror
The killer moves in silence
All the victims live in terror

The killer is a girl
Her hair is in curls
The victims were abused
Sadly the saviour was accused


message 33: by Emily (new)

Emily Huang | 11 comments my book is Jane Eyre, and here is what I have to say about the story.

I read this book called Jane Eyre
for the first time in like......forever
I get it, but just the first few chapters
The rest, well it it doesn't seem like it matters
anymore, because what good is reading
if you don't understand the story's meaning


i mean, its not that the story is bad
it's just that,... don't you think that it its sad
that you are reading a new book for the first time
but you just cannot finish reading in time


JUst because all you know about the story is,
Is the poor girl who is probably
the only one stuck in your head,
leaving you very disappointed till' you're dead.


Well, I just wish that I'll be able to read it again
if I buy the full version story, and read till' the end
Well, that's all about my poem, Jane Eyre,
written by an author that's ought to be admired.


(Because even if I don't understand the story,
It doesn't mean that it is boring)


message 34: by ReynaldiS (new)

ReynaldiS | 17 comments I read murder by art
It was nice
It's not fart
Made my gwyneth charlize
Maxine is a doctor
Grabowski is a detective
They work together
To solve crime


message 35: by ReynaldiS (new)

ReynaldiS | 17 comments I read murder by art
It was nice
It's not fart
Made my gwyneth charlize
Maxine is a doctor
Grabowski is a detective
They work together
To solve crime


message 36: by Gwyneth (new)

Gwyneth | 35 comments Sugar glider poem

Sugar glider is about a man
A man who ran
Ran away from his family
To fullfill his reaponsibility

Don is a pilot
Not a pirate
He has a daughter
But he didn't bother


message 37: by Travis (new)

Travis Wijaya | 3 comments The Enemy Poem

We have a lot of enemies
We fight them one by one
We treat them with justice
We get the job done

Malcolm is a spy catcher
He wears a jacket made out of leather
He's good in spying
This book is interesting


message 38: by Sien (new)

Sien | 10 comments Sugar Glider

Sugar glider is a plane
It flies to a lane
Flying up to the sky
and we should not cry

Jude is a girl
she is as white as a pearl
Don is a man
and he ran away without a plan


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