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message 1: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
I like to dabble in poems and mostly my poems are funny little verses of ridiculous things.


message 2: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Ink a bink a bottle of ink
I waste a bottle or two
To write what's true
I write with a pink feathered pen
Plucked from my little white hen
Who lays in a pen
In the middle of Jenn
Now I wrote what's true


message 3: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Lol! Very creative. ;P


message 4: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Title- Chocolate Cookies

Happiness is around the corner
Maybe even a block
No easy walk
For most
Though I don't like to boast
Mine was in the pantry!


message 5: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Hahahhahaa.....I want cookies now!


message 6: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Then the poem worked!! ;P


message 7: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
My feet walk the endless path of the world
Traveling new paths
Walking familiar ways
Joining the throng of more
Yet do they tire with the journeys?
Do they wish for rest?
Do they hate the important role they play?
I say no
My feet swim in the wonders of the world
Happy to take on the hardship
Happy to guide me


message 8: by Saarah (new)

Saarah | 1899 comments Mod
ooh smiley these are so good!


message 9: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Matt wrote: "SmilingDork wrote: "My feet walk the endless path of the world
Traveling new paths
Walking familiar ways
Joining the throng of more
Yet do they tire with the journeys?
Do they wish for rest?
Do th..."


Agreed!


message 10: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
I am so flattered guys!!! More to come!!


message 11: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Sixteen years I've roamed this Earth
Sixteen years since my birth
So many years to go before death
And I will never ever pick up meth.

(Yeah.....it is neatly six o'clock in the morning and I am so pooped from today that I litter ally can't come up with anything better than method at the moment. Will revise later!)


message 12: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Yup. It says your life is important and your not going to just throw it away.


message 13: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Lol okay! ;P


message 14: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
A Dollar a dime
Is how you tell the time
In New Hime
Which you locate near and far
Of the Slimetime
On Planet Lime
Where all the people
Are big brown slime
And the only language is Blime
So if you visit Planet Lime
Be careful cause the Slime
Will eat you alive!!


message 15: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yeah most of my poetry is REALLY weird and kinda funny.Planet Lime (Seen in previous comment) was one of my earlier ones.


message 16: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments Hahahahaha XP This is great Smiling!!! It made me laugh so!! XD Awesome (:
And I hope to never go to planet lime or I may lose my mind :-P Get it(;


message 17: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Lol! So witty!! ;P I started laughing but them stopped cause my little sister is sleeping. Glad you liked it!!


message 18: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments Hahaha :D Of course!! Hahahaha XP


message 19: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Lol!


message 20: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments ;D


message 21: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yes! Yes!! Give me the smiley faces! *Said in the most deranged way possible* ;P


message 22: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
:)


message 23: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments Hahaha :D XD :) :-) XP ;∆)


message 24: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (last edited Sep 05, 2015 10:30PM) (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Hehehe...Go MK!!!! How you like them apples KitKat? \^o^/

P.S. After this post I will stop teasing you. Maybe. *Ponders, long and hard* Okay, Okay, I've decided I will. Your welcome.


message 25: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments Yay!! Thank you- Thank you *bows smiling wide* Haha XP


message 26: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Lol! You guys crack me up! And thank SO much for no longer teasing me. The gummy bears and unicorns already do enough of that. ;P


message 27: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments Hahaha!! Yay!! XP Haha
*looks around confused* Wait were you serious about gummy bears? Haha XD


message 28: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Mmmaaaayyyyybbbbbeeeee* Avoids eye contact and tells the gummy bears to be quiet * ;P


message 29: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments Hahahahaha *cracking up*


message 30: by M.K. (new)

M.K. Aneal (mkaneal) | 550 comments I have a song for you- The Gummy Bear Song - Long English Version: http://youtu.be/astISOttCQ0

Hehehehehehe XP


message 31: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Lol!! It is both funny and weird.


message 32: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Apples and pumpkins
Scent the autumn air
Leaves of fire fall to the ground
Skeleton trees sad to lose their summer life.
Restless spirits rise from their grave
To visit their loved ones one last time


message 33: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Here you go Smiley! Let me know if this worked!


message 34: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Yup! Let's add another poem......


message 35: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
BURNING TREES

Trees of fire
Leaves falling to the floor
Like stray sparks floating in the wind
When their fire burns
It makes the day warmer rather than colder
When that fire burns out
The world is set into cold and darkness
For eternity until the trees find life once again
The world starts over
And the world begins again.


message 36: by Ravanna Dee, Top Mod (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) | 2989 comments Mod
Very pretty, Smiley. XD


message 37: by SmilingDork (new)

SmilingDork | 2519 comments Mod
Thxs! That is one of my earlier ones too! It was inspired by some maple trees I saw in Colorado and their colors were like nothing I ever seen!!! *Eyes filled with wonderment*


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