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poetry anyone?

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message 1: by Zena (new)

Zena Ok, so i love to write poetry, and i hope some of you do too. i was hoping that i could post some of the poems that i write and could have some constructive criticism form you guys. (anyone else who writes poetry can put what they write up too, its not exclusively for my poetry).


message 2: by Zena (new)

Zena Smiles

Faces that portray a
Smile
Do not really mean
That smile.

Some people smile
A half smile,
That shows some of

The pain they feel
Inside.

Some people show
A fake smile,
That shows they think
That nobody can see
Through the mask of
Indifference.

Few people show
A genuine smile,
One that shows
Not fear
Or pain,
Or indifference,

But one that shows
How genuine a person
Can be.

Among a world of masked smiles.


message 3: by Heather (new)

Heather Salsbury (twilightblonde) wow thats really good!


message 4: by Zena (new)

Zena thanks a lot!


message 5: by Heather (new)

Heather Salsbury (twilightblonde) I write poetry 2! :-D


message 6: by Zena (new)

Zena YAY! Go poetry nuts!


message 7: by Heather (new)

Heather Salsbury (twilightblonde) LOL!!!! I posted 1 u cam read


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