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message 1: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ƭнєяє ωєяє σηcє тωσ тяιвєѕ. Oηє нα∂ ƒυя тнє cσℓσя σƒ тнє ∂αякєѕт ηιgнт, тнє σтнєя ωιтн тнє ραℓєѕт мσση. Ƭσgєтнєя тнєу ωσυℓ∂ нανє вєєη ιη∂єѕтяυcтιвℓє, вυт αƒтєя σηє мιѕтαкє, тнєу ƒєℓℓ тσ ωαяяιηg. Ƭнє ωαяѕ нανє ℓσηg ραѕт вєтωєєη тнє ωσℓνєѕ σƒ тнє ηιgнт αη∂ тнє ωσℓνєѕ σƒ тнє мσση...вυт ѕтιℓℓ ℓιєѕ ιη єνєяу мємσяу ωнαт тнє σтнєя ∂ι∂ тσ тнєιя тяιвє, αη∂ ѕтιℓℓ нαтє ƒєѕтєяѕ ιη ∂єєρ, ∂αяк cσяηєяѕ. Ƭнєу ѕтιℓℓ нαтє єαcн σтнєя, вυт нανє αgяєє∂ тσ ѕтσρ тнє Ɯσℓƒ Ɯαяѕ, αѕ тσσ мαηу ℓινєѕ ωєяє ℓσѕт. Ɓυт ѕтιℓℓ...

Ƭωσ cυвѕ ѕнαℓℓ вє вσяη, σηє ωнσѕє ƒυя ιѕ тнє cσℓσя σƒ ∂єєρєѕт ∂αяк, тнє σтнєя тнє cσℓσя σƒ тнє мσση'ѕ вяιgнтєѕт αяc. Ƭнєу ѕнαℓℓ вє тнє Sтαяѕ' Ƥαιя, αη∂ тнєу ѕнαℓℓ вяιηg тнє тяιвєѕ тσgєтнєя αт ℓαѕт.

...ιƒ тнєу ∂αяє тσ тяу.


message 2: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Aug 09, 2015 06:36AM) (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
F ur the color of the night,
The deepest, darkest night,
Fur the color of the moon's bright light,
A brilliant, beautiful, bright white light.

T wo tribes shall war,
From night until day,
Two tribes shall hate,
What the other has to say.

T his will last,
'Til the forests are gone,
Unless two odd cubs,
The brightest night born on.

O f the tribe of darkest blue,
Is born one cub of brightest hue,
Of the tribe of brightest hue,
Is born one cub of darkest blue.

E ach odd cub shall speak at last,
Each odd cub shall show the way,
Both must help,
The other's pack,
Both must die,
For the other's back.


message 3: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod



message 4: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Awesomesauce


message 5: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) WOW! That's amazing. Where do you come up with this stuff?


message 6: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
XD Thx Kamiko


Ravanna: Thanks!!!!!!!!!! I dunno, I just found the image online as I was looking for something completely random, and I was like - Oooh! That'd make a cool story! XD but yeah thanks so much! I love getting inspiration from pictures, I really want to like find a whole book just of these epic pics for writing prompts and stuffs, but I can't seem to find one...I don't think they exist...they should tho :)

A story I wrote for school Summer homework: :) (inspiration from a pic) Here


message 7: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) I read it. It was awesome!


message 8: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Thanks! (again :) )


message 9: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (last edited Aug 11, 2015 11:04AM) (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Name: Leda/Lyra/Luna (still thinking, which do you guys think?)
Gender: female
Appearance: Fur whitest of white, blue eyes, again, perfectly white fur with no hints of gray or black, claws are gray, however.
Personality:
Pack: Black Pack

Name: Marek (still not sure though)
Gender: male
Appearance: Fur darker than shadows, blue eyes, gray claws.
Personality:
Pack: White Pack


UNDER EDIT


message 10: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Ooooooo.... I can't wait to see what's next!


message 11: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Thanks! Do you have any suggestions for names of the two characters? I'm really struggling on the black wolf right now XD


message 12: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Zane?


message 13: by em_panada (last edited Aug 14, 2015 10:57AM) (new)

em_panada Mmmmmm....

*Names meaning dark and other variants etc.*

Curran

Kieron

Piran

Rama

*Names meaning wolf*

Rafe

Lyall


I'm a very.... meaning inspired person you could say when it comes to names. :) Anyway, I don't know your character from your standpoint, but those are the few that stuck out to me. Zane is a good, strong name.


message 14: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Mm! Thank you Ravanna and Emmeline! Yes, I was looking all over the internet for male names that meant dark/night/shadows/etc etc, but I just couldn't find one I felt really suited this character...

Anyway, thanks again to both of you! I really like some of those names, like Rafe and Zane, so thanks!


message 15: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Eммelιɴe wrote: "Mmmmmm....

*Names meaning dark and other variants etc.*

Curran

Kieron

Piran

Rama

*Names meaning wolf*

Rafe

Lyall


I'm a very.... meaning inspired person you could say when it comes to name..."


Wow Emmeline. When ever I'm having a hard time finding a creative name for one of my characters, I know who to go to. XP


message 16: by em_panada (new)

em_panada ^ haha! Thanx! But, I liked your suggestion too. I would've never thought of it!


message 17: by Ravanna Dee (new)

Ravanna Dee (ravannadee) Lol! Thanx!


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