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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > 1st Chapter YA Fantasy

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message 1: by Maya (new)

Maya Misra | 16 comments Hi! I'm currently trying to decide between two versions of a first chapter. I'd love all the feedback I can get!

My novel is high fantasy, and the villain is the main character (although he doesn't start out that way). Each chapter version is around 2000 words.

PM me or reply below!

Thanks!
Maya


message 2: by Randall (new)

Randall S. Davis (randalls) Send it my way at rdavis060@gmail.com and I'll have a look.


message 3: by Maya (new)

Maya Misra | 16 comments Thanks! I sent an email.


message 4: by Crystal (new)

Crystal | 28 comments Maya wrote: "Hi! I'm currently trying to decide between two versions of a first chapter. I'd love all the feedback I can get!

My novel is high fantasy, and the villain is the main character (although he doesn..."


Hi Maya,

I'd love to take a look at your chapters. Pm me if you're interested :)
Crystal


message 5: by Maya (new)

Maya Misra | 16 comments As it so happens, I've picked a version. Thanks to everyone who helped! :)


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