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What problems can the main male character' girlfriend( the main female character's enemy) cause in YA books?
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Nuzhat
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Feb 06, 2014 12:59AM

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The boy's girlfriend is symbolized as an overly jealous mean girl, right? So it depends. How mean do you want her to be? Do you want her to toy with Faith's mental state of mind, by feeding her lies about Asher and her? Do you want her to be threatening? How are her looks compared to your girl protag. and is that an advantage? I'm not sure if the guy gradually falls in love with the girl while still being in a relationship, or if the girlfriend cheats before he falls in love with the girl, but either way, what makes the guy drawn to his girlfriend in the first place, and is he willing to sacrifice that to be with Faith? There are so many nits and tricks you could experiement with. Hope some of these ideas help you

It's definitely a start:). If it's her emotional demeanor that changes due to her jealousy, then be sure to state that also.