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message 1: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments I'm new here and I'm writing. PLEASE don't hurt me.


message 2: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Lost
I’m lost.
Unseen.
Forgotten.
Where is my heart?
Where is my start
For a new time?
What am I now?
Where will I go?
Where are you?
I don’t know
What I should do.
I am lost.


message 3: by Reann (new)

Reann That's really good:D


message 4: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Thanks. I was listening to a sad song while writing.


message 5: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments that's a great poem


message 7: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments :D


message 8: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Poison on Pain
Poison on pain
Drives me insane.
Dropped from the rain,
A tuna sandwich.

It's French. Poison means fish, pain(spelled "pane") means bread.


message 9: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Pfftbt, too short, I know.


message 11: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Hmm. I learned French when I was in the hospital. The doctor's didn't ask me anything, they just took tests on me. So, why not learn French? Thanks, anyway.


message 12: by Eoraor (last edited Feb 03, 2014 03:27PM) (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Correl turned her back, gazing at the sunset.
"It is time for me to go..."
Lorily wiped the tears from her eyes. "We lost Brad, I don't want you to leave. Don't go." She wiped the blood from her face.
"I'm sorry," said Correl, "I told you after the final fight I would leave.I at first thought you be happy to have me gone. Now you are my friend, but I still have to leave."
Light flashed. Lorily looked up to see her new friend gone.
"Correl!"


message 13: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments whoa- what just happened


message 14: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments It's just part of a story I'm writing,but I don't think I'll ever write the full story on Goodreads.


message 15: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments why not?


message 16: by Eoraor (last edited Feb 04, 2014 06:01PM) (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Daughter of The Night wrote: "why not?"
You know, maybe I will write the full story.....


message 17: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments yay! lol


message 18: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments -will lose contact during other SCHOOL HAVING weekdays-


message 19: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments ☯ Mimaimi {Raggedy Man, Goodnight} {Call me Mai} ☯ wrote: "Gods -__-
Raafia..... Dalek. Is. Annoying. The. Hell. Out. Of. Me.
So is Kristan! Need I remind her that I'm the reason we're even able to sell bows?! She doesn't even see that her duct tape bows a..."

That bad?


message 20: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments ☯ Mimaimi {Raggedy Man, Goodnight} {Call me Mai} ☯ wrote: "Yes.. That bad. That bad.
I love your writing! You should post that writing you showed me at school... I vaguely remembered this:

"You.... You have killed us all." Zia said.

Right? POST IT! I w..."

Muufiiinssssssssssssssssss. I lost the paper.


message 21: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments We live on the same block....................


message 22: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Oh. hahahahhahahahahahhahahah


message 23: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments ☯ Mimaimi {Raggedy Man, Goodnight} {Call me Mai} ☯ wrote: "It's snowing...
Man, I hope we don't go to school on Monday."

*nod*


message 24: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments ☯ Mimaimi {Raggedy Man, Goodnight} {Call me Mai} ☯ wrote: "Poor cars... they can't even reach the top of the sloping street. One is slowing backing down... but it's stuck again."

*nod*


message 25: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments What?


message 26: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments 'kay.


message 27: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments gfhgffhghdfijhgdxuigidhg


message 28: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments A little bit of sunshine
Never hurt anyone.
A little bit of darkness
Isn't that scary.

A little wonder
Is what this world needs.
And a little bit of fear
Can't hurt anyone.


message 29: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Why? It must be bad though.




message 30: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments ☯ Mimaimi {Raggedy Man, Goodnight} {Call me Mai} ☯ wrote: "waiting for the laptop. yes it is bad. I don't like it...."

How long until you get the laptop?


message 31: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Hoorah!


message 32: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments ☯ Mimaimi {Raggedy Man, Goodnight} {Call me Mai} ☯ wrote: "HERE! :D
Let's go to chat."

OKAY CAHATTAADAFDFHSAFGH


message 33: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments They Think I'm Dead
By: Eoraor
I lay unmoving on the ground.
They think I'm dead.
The liquid oozing from me
Red.

They don't know
I will fight.
I'll fight if I have to
All day and night.
I'll fight
For what is right.

I will fight as long as I have to
Until I'm with you.


message 34: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments What? I'm a girl, but you can still call me bro.


message 35: by Alyssa (last edited Feb 17, 2014 05:24PM) (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments that's awesome...
haha @Eoraor & Kiula


message 36: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments NO SHIPPING


message 37: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments no I was just replying to both of you saying "haha". I was too lazy to do:
haha @Eoraor
haha @Kiula

sorry


message 38: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments XD


message 39: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Oh.

WELL THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY AND




message 40: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments XD HAHAHAHAHAHA


message 41: by Eoraor (last edited Feb 17, 2014 05:31PM) (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments The picture ends the sentence.....


message 42: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments guys, let me breathe! I'm laughing too hard


message 43: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments yes, I'm still alive, thanks for asking lol


message 44: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Boom
By: Eoraor

Bam, boom.
Ba bing.
Try not to sing.
Try not to ring
In insane cries.
It might lead to your demise.


message 45: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments Hmmm.

I.I


message 46: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments For school I had to make a poem about Ruby Bridges. Well, a song that looks like a poem.

Ruby Bridges (Part 1)
By: Eoraor

Ruby Bridges passed a test,
A hard one, to be stated.
But, before she could rest
She had to go to a school
Where she was hated.

On November 14, 1960,
Four colored girls went to two schools
Not obeying the rule
That colored people were not allowed.


message 47: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (abilyssaxoxo) | 1290 comments haha that's pretty good! You two go to the same school?


message 48: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments I ALREADY MADE 11 SLIDES


message 49: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments OH WELL
IT'S OFFICIAL
I HAVE GONE INSANE


message 50: by Eoraor (new)

Eoraor | 284 comments OKAY



NOW YOUR ARGUMENT IS INVALID


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