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Michelle wrote: "Is this MG or YA?"
It is YA
It is YA
Michelle wrote: "I'm interested in taking a look at it. Can you send me the first three chapters? My emails tong_michelle8@yahoo.com"
Yes I can. Do you mind if it's a word document? And if you want to do a swap, I'd be willing.
Yes I can. Do you mind if it's a word document? And if you want to do a swap, I'd be willing.
Yeah a word attachment is fine. That'd be great if we could swap! There's a description of my novel in one of the previous posts.
Can you send the first 3 chaps and I'll send my first 3?
Michelle wrote: "Yeah a word attachment is fine. That'd be great if we could swap! There's a description of my novel in one of the previous posts."
Okay great! I'll send them your way and wait for yours.
Okay great! I'll send them your way and wait for yours.
The story is 88 pages and a little under 50k words.
Summary: The world took a turn for the better. There were less problems, less diseases and less to worry about. Or that's what He told her.
Experiment Arcelia 14786 is His favorite. She was so vital to the Lab she inhabited that they painted her door blue instead of the sterile white that plastered everything else. She knew all the passcodes and looked down submissively. She was the perfect experiment because of Him.
But when He brings in a new experiment from the Outside called Experiment Varian, she finds herself experiencing change whether she likes it or not. And its all because of Experiment Varian, the only other one to accept the Red Virus Trial besides Arcelia herself.
Unlike the passive Arcelia, Varian isn't going to let the Lab take him down.