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message 2: by Christina♥ , ♥super duper lover of TWILIGHT and oh yeah Edward is mine!♥ (new)

Christina♥  | 3132 comments Mod

message 3: by Bree (new)

Bree (thatbookishlife) omc!!! IT'S REALLY GOOD.

message 4: by Moody (new)

Moody Claire (singurl) | 2 comments thanks guys. I'm just wondering, is it bad that i posted a new topic here without asking the moderator first???

I'm only a month or tuwning two here in GR so I'm a bit unaware of what to and not to do.

message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

No it's fine

I read your story and i thought it was really good. I am a bit of a grammer freak and i have to say there were many places where it was redundant, or things were mispelled or uncapitalized but other than that it was really good.

((sorry for the critizims i have OCD when it comes to grammer i always have to correct it, unless it is my own.))

message 6: by Keelin (new)

Keelin | 90 comments HAHAHAHAHAHA i drive my friends mental with that even when there talking but i dnt mind it in this sense. i think its a good story, cuz ive always wundered what happened afer the clearing at the end of the 4th book and this is another vrsion of what could have happend

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