Reader needed for YA Dystopian novel

[Shawna]

Synopsis: A society in which breeding amoung people is controlled. Children are raised as partners to love only each other, and to work together as a single unit. Analeigh and Declan have grown up together as partners. She loves their life and looks forward to one day going to camp to become a breeder. The older they get the stranger Declan becomes angry one minute and fine the next. What happens when being made for one another may not be enough?

Im a newbie and looking for some help on my rough draft. If you would like to read a couple chapters and see if you want more I would be overjoyed to get any feedback.

[Dave]

Send me a couple chapters. Sounds interesting :) ds24022@yahoo.com

[Shawna]

Thank you Im sitting here working on it Ill send you the first three chapters if thats alright.

[Dave]

ok, sounds good!

[Bethany]

Hi Shawna, I have a paranormal romance and was wondering if you would be interested in swapping stories. My novel is completed and is just under 80k words.
Your story sounds interesting and like a good read. I would be happy to give you honest feedback if you would do the same for me.
Here is a synopsis for my story
Gene has taken on the role of alpha after the devastating loss of his father. A war is on the horizon and Gene is determined not to fail his pack. He makes an unlikely alliance with Natalia, the woman his enemy is hunting. The more time they spend together, the more Gene finds himself drawn to the sexy, mysterious, she-wolf.
Natalia has lost faith in her kind. After being rescued from her captors by Gene’s pack, she wants to take her son and run far away from everyone. But, she knows she wouldn’t get far with her psychotic family chasing her. She agrees to team up with Gene in an attempt to end her family’s tyranny. As they attempt to work together, she finds herself wondering if she can truly trust him, or will his betrayal be the greatest yet?

[Shawna]

Sure we can swap out. Mine is def a work in progress. Would you be ok with doing 3 chapters or so at a time because Im reading for others as well. Im a quick reader but I want to make sure im giving you good feedback.