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message 1: by Emily Ann (new)

Emily Ann | 78 comments I hide from fear, that nameless thing
That creeps behind the shadow’s wing
And seeps into the hearts of many
And crushes hope if there is any

I clutch the light for fear of dark
I run from its whisper, its shadowed mark
And cower from the crushing weight
Of that darkened dreaded state

I tremble to feel its clutching grip
To feel it tighten, feel it rip
To always feel the awful dread
To know that I, the darkness fed

Because in the dark its shadows feed
In us, the shadows seed
It’s only desire to survive
To be the only one alive

I hide from this fear, this nameless thing
That creeps behind the shadows wing
And seeps into the hearts of many
And crushes hope if there is any


message 2: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Wow, I love the imagery and rhyme.


message 3: by Emily Ann (last edited Dec 02, 2013 05:44PM) (new)

Emily Ann | 78 comments Thank you! It's kind of ruff but thanks.


message 4: by Joshua (new)

Joshua | 6 comments astounding this was great and i agree with you Emily i (personally) loved the imagery and rhyme.


message 5: by Olivia (new)

Olivia | 213 comments Wow that was deep loved it.


message 6: by Emily Ann (new)

Emily Ann | 78 comments Thank you! :)


message 7: by Joshua (new)

Joshua | 6 comments i reckon that this has got to be my favorite piece of poetry i have ever read! (and mind you i haven't read that many either)


message 8: by Emily Ann (last edited Dec 05, 2013 05:14PM) (new)

Emily Ann | 78 comments Well thank you, I'll take the position of best poem in your mind until you find another one which you most probably will. There are a lot of of awesome poems out there.


message 9: by Joshua (new)

Joshua | 6 comments Emily Ann wrote: "Well thank you, I'll take the position of best poem in your mind until you find another one which you most probably will. There are a lot of of awesome poems out there."

i don't know yours is pretty good if i do say so mysel


message 10: by Emily Ann (new)

Emily Ann | 78 comments :)


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