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message 1: by Za-za (new)

Za-za Thank you for reading! Feedback, pointers, and/or constructive criticism are much appreciated. :)


Playing the Song

Glancing up at the empty crowd
Before playing the song,
Of life aloud
Never to know
Never to hear
A life written blank
So murkily clear
A million notes
And one song for all,
Played for a lifetime
Unwilling to fall
Looking at your face
At the song written out
An unheard movement
I know nothing about
Just playing Along
But that's just
Not
My
Song
Fingers flying over the keys
Searching desperately for release
To a place with music
Playing the song.


message 2: by Emily Ann (new)

Emily Ann | 78 comments Nice


message 3: by Za-za (new)

Za-za Thank you! :)


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow, this is great! I love how it flows so well! Keep it up!


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